Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 3-5 câu để tránh lan man.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I often sing when I do household chores or while drawing. Singing makes these activities more enjoyable and fun.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như thì và danh từ số nhiều.

예시: Yes, I have been learning how to sing since I was in the third or fourth grade. At first, it was quite difficult for me, but gradually I got used to it and improved a lot.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn còn dài dòng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng từ nối để liên kết ý và làm rõ lý do bạn muốn hát cho gia đình.

예시: I want to sing for my family because singing allows me to express my emotions. Through songs, I can show my love and let them know how much I care about them.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa ý kiến của bạn.

예시: I think singing can bring happiness to people, especially if the song has a cheerful melody. For example, happy songs can easily lift the mood of listeners and make them feel joyful.

× Of course I really loved had to sing.

✓ Of course I really love to sing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'loved had to sing' which is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correct form is 'I really love to sing' to express a present preference. The verb 'love' should be in present tense to match the question about liking singing.

× I'll saying when?

✓ I'll say when?

'I'll saying' is incorrect because 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. The correct form is 'I'll say'.

× Like when doing household chores or buffing or drawings.

✓ Like when I am doing household chores or buffing or drawing.

The sentence lacks a subject before the verb 'doing'. Adding 'I am' makes the sentence grammatically correct. Also, 'drawings' should be 'drawing' to match the verb form.

× That's an interesting questions of horse.

✓ That's an interesting question, of course.

'Questions' should be singular 'question' to match 'an interesting'. 'Of horse' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'of course'. Correcting to 'of course' makes the sentence meaningful.

× I've been learning how to sync since I was in the 3rd or 4th grade.

✓ I've been learning how to sing since I was in the 3rd or 4th grade.

The word 'sync' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'sing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× It's quite hard hard for me at the first start, but now I get used to it.

✓ It was quite hard for me at the beginning, but now I have gotten used to it.

The phrase 'at the first start' is awkward; 'at the beginning' is more natural. Also, 'It's' (present) should be 'It was' (past) to match the past difficulty. 'I get used to it' should be 'I have gotten used to it' to indicate a completed process.

× Ummm sing for my family obvious because I've always wanted to be expressed my emotion through singing for my loved ones so that's how they know what I feel about them or been thinking about them anytime and show my love to them.

✓ Ummm, I sing for my family obviously because I've always wanted to express my emotions through singing for my loved ones so that's how they know what I feel about them or what I've been thinking about and to show my love to them.

The sentence lacks subject 'I' before 'sing'. 'Obvious' should be 'obviously' (adverb). 'Be expressed' is incorrect; it should be 'express'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. The phrase 'been thinking about them anytime' is awkward; 'what I've been thinking about' is clearer. Added 'to' before 'show my love' for correct infinitive form.

× Well, it really depends which on melody that you use if the song.

✓ Well, it really depends on which melody you use in the song.

The phrase 'depends which on melody' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depends on which melody'. Also, 'if the song' is awkward; 'in the song' is appropriate.

× Contains like, uhm, silly or UM, happy melody that can easily bring Joyce for two people that are listening to.

✓ If it contains a silly or happy melody, it can easily bring joy to the people who are listening.

'Joyce' is a misspelling of 'joy'. 'Two people that are listening to' is awkward; 'the people who are listening' is better. Also, 'melody' should be preceded by an article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.