Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Obviously yes I do and I think it is a great VR for lax relaxing your mind and I feel that if I listen my favorite song it had to change my mood and I feel very positive and motivated for the rest of the mountain.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Oh no, actually I never get chance to learn singing in my lifetime. But I remember my brother who studied in private school and so the teacher used to him teaching school so like he always talking me about this stuff that he learned from school.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
That's an interesting question. I would like to sing for my kids because I love them not and I believe like if I sing in front of them, so they will feel very happy and very exciting. And I think it is the IT will be great moment for me.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, definitely. I think it is a great way to bring people feelings and their mood into happiness. Were happy vibration and moreover that were listening music is also effect on your health, your mood and your vibrations.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "VR for lax relaxing" and "for the rest of the mountain." Try to use clear and simple language, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and organize it logically.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and improve my mood. When I listen to my favourite songs, I feel more positive and motivated throughout the day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 40.0제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question. Focus on giving a clear and concise response with proper sentence structure.
예시: No, I have never had the chance to learn how to sing formally. However, my brother took singing lessons at his private school and often shared what he learned with me.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by unclear phrasing and grammar errors such as "love them not" and "it is the IT will be great moment." Try to express your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: I would like to sing for my children because I love them very much. I believe that singing for them would make them happy and excited. It would also be a special and memorable moment for me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 45.0제안: Your answer has good intent but contains unclear expressions and grammar mistakes like "were happy vibration" and "were listening music is also effect." Try to use clear sentences and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.
예시: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people. It can improve their mood and create positive feelings. Additionally, listening to music has been shown to have beneficial effects on health and well-being.
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