Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中多次出现了拼写错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意单词拼写，避免重复表达（如'like seeing a lot'和'lafond of music'意思重复）。回答应更简洁自然，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误（'cause'应为'course'，'seeing'应为'singing'），且表达不够自然。建议使用正确词汇，表达清晰，避免语法错误。可以简洁说明没有专业学习经验，但自学。

예시: No, I haven't taken any professional singing courses. I usually practice singing by myself every day.

제안: 回答内容有趣且具体，但句子结构稍显复杂，部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，同时保持内容的具体性。

예시: I want to sing for my cat because it doesn't judge me. It just sits quietly and listens to my singing.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，难以理解。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以说明唱歌如何带来快乐和积极的影响。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it helps them feel positive and share good energy with others.

× Yes, I like seeing a lot and lafond of music is not my only reason.

✓ Yes, I like singing a lot and being fond of music is not my only reason.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。'lafond'应为'being fond'，表示喜欢某事。动词后接动名词形式。

× I think seeing is a good way to convey my emotions and release my pressure.

✓ I think singing is a good way to convey my emotions and release my pressure.

同上，'seeing'应为'singing'，保持语义一致。

× No, I haven't got any professional cause for seeing.

✓ No, I haven't had any professional course for singing.

'haven't got'在这里应使用完成时态'haven't had'更合适，且'cause'应为'course'，表示课程。

× No, I haven't got any professional cause for seeing.

✓ No, I haven't had any professional course for singing.

'seeing'应为'singing'，保持语义一致。

× I always learn day by myself.

✓ I always learn by myself every day.

'day by myself'表达不正确，应为'every day'表示每天，'learn by myself'表示自学。

× I want to sing for my cat because I can sing whatever I want when I sing for it, and I will get no judgment.

✓ I want to sing for my cat because I can sing whatever I want when I sing for it, and I will get no judgment.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× It will just stay at my feet and listen to me carefully.

✓ It will just stay at my feet and listen to me carefully.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I think, think and bring up the good size of people.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings out the good side of people.

原句结构混乱，'think and bring up the good size of people'不通顺，应改为'singing brings out the good side of people'表达正确意思。

× And when seeing the energy follow can be passed 1 by 1.

✓ And when singing, the energy can be passed one by one.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'follow'用法错误，应去掉，数字用英文单词表达更正式。