Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），且表达不够自然和完整。建议直接回答喜欢唱歌的原因，并用完整句子表达。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions and it is very enjoyable.

제안: 回答中句子不完整，表达不流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，并补充更多细节。

예시: Yes, I have learnt singing in my school's music class, where the teacher teaches us techniques to improve our voice.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达你的想法。

예시: I want to sing for my loved one to show my feelings and make him feel special.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），句子结构不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel relaxed.

× I like seeing because I wanna be a singer.

✓ I like singing because I wanna be a singer.

动词“like”后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里“seeing”应改为“singing”。

× Yes, in my school we have music class. Our teacher will teach us how to sing and. To be better.

✓ Yes, in my school we have music class. Our teacher will teach us how to sing and how to be better.

句子结构不完整，“and”后面缺少内容，应补充完整句子，使表达连贯。

× I want to sing for my lover because I wanna he know my thing is very beautiful and he will love me.

✓ I want to sing for my lover because I want him to know my singing is very beautiful and he will love me.

“wanna he know”中“he”应为宾格“him”，且表达不完整，需改为“want him to know”。“my thing”不明确，应改为“my singing”。

× I think seeing can bring happiness to people. People get express their emotions to be relaxed.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people. People can express their emotions to be relaxed.

“seeing”应为“singing”，表示唱歌。第二句中“get express”用法错误，应改为“can express”。