Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'To say in front of others,' say 'because I feel shy singing in front of others.'

예시: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, and I feel shy singing in front of others.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. For example, say 'Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school because we had music classes every day.'

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school because we had music classes every day.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete sentence and explain your idea. For example, 'I want to sing for famous singers because I admire them and want to perform with them.'

예시: I want to sing for famous singers because I admire them and would love to perform alongside them.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear words. Use correct pronouns and vocabulary. For example, 'Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relieve stress.'

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel happy and joyful when they sing their favorite songs along with others.

× No, I don't like singing because my voice is not good, so I feel a little bit shy. To say in front of others.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is not good, so I feel a little bit shy to sing in front of others.

The original sentence ends with a fragment 'To say in front of others' which is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete thought. The verb 'say' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing' to match the context.

× I have learned to see when I was in the primary school.

✓ I learned to sing when I was in primary school.

The phrase 'have learned to see' is incorrect; it should be 'learned to sing' to match the context. Also, 'have learned' is present perfect tense, but since a specific past time 'when I was in primary school' is mentioned, simple past tense 'learned' is appropriate. 'The primary school' should be 'primary school' without 'the'.

× My briberies gold have a laces up music everyday so I need to learn how to say every day.

✓ My teachers gave me music lessons every day, so I needed to learn how to sing every day.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'briberies gold' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'laces up music' is incorrect; 'say' should be 'sing'; 'everyday' as one word is an adjective, but here 'every day' as two words is correct. The sentence is corrected to a meaningful and grammatically correct form.

× I want to sing for singer.

✓ I want to sing for a singer.

The noun 'singer' is singular and needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Without the article, the sentence is incomplete.

× Yes, I believe she can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrectly used here to refer to 'singing'. 'Singing' is a gerund and should be treated as a noun, so 'she' is inappropriate. Replacing 'she' with 'singing' clarifies the meaning.

× See allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve track.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

'See' is incorrect; it should be 'Singing'. Also, 'relieve track' is incorrect; the correct word is 'stress'. These corrections make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× For example, many people feel a flip and joyful when they say their favorite song in along with others.

✓ For example, many people feel happy and joyful when they sing their favorite song along with others.

The phrase 'feel a flip and joyful' is incorrect; 'happy and joyful' is appropriate. 'Say their favorite song' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'sing'. 'In along with others' is incorrect; it should be 'along with others'. These corrections improve clarity and grammar.