Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it is easy and fun for me. Moreover, singing makes me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议用完整句子说明学习唱歌的经历，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Recently, I have been learning to sing by watching videos on TikTok. I think this method is very useful and helps me improve my singing skills.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，句子断断续续，建议用完整句子表达想为谁唱歌及原因，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: I want to sing for my mother and father because they are the best people in the world to me. I want to show my appreciation and love for them.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I think singing can bring happiness to people because when someone sings happily, their joyful voice can make others feel happier too.

× I like see me.

✓ I like singing.

这里动词like后面应该接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。原句中see me不符合语法，正确用法是like + 动名词。

× 'Cause I think it's an easy.

✓ 'Cause I think it's easy.

easy是形容词，前面不需要冠词an。原句中使用了不正确的冠词，应该直接用形容词easy。

× So funny to me.

✓ It's so funny to me.

句子缺少主语和谓语，完整句子应为“It is so funny to me.”，表示“对我来说很有趣”。

× And. It will. Make me feel happy.

✓ And it will make me feel happy.

句子中断句不当，应连贯成一句完整的话。

× Recently I nursing in TikTok.

✓ Recently I have been learning singing on TikTok.

原句中nursing用法错误，且时态不对。应使用现在完成进行时表示最近一直在学习唱歌。

× And. I think. Is very useful to me and. Is improve my singing skills?

✓ And I think it is very useful to me and it improves my singing skills.

句子缺少主语，且时态和结构不正确。应补充主语it，并用一般现在时表达事实。

× I want to see Cindy my thing for my mother and father 'cause they are the. Best. People. In the world for me.

✓ I want to sing Cindy my song for my mother and father because they are the best people in the world to me.

原句中see Cindy my thing语义不明，应该是sing Cindy my song。并且because拼写完整，people后面不需要句号。

× And I want to. Appreciate them. And care about me.

✓ And I want to appreciate them and care about them.

care about后面应该接宾语them，表示关心他们，而不是自己。

× I think singing can bring happiness to people 'cause if you have a happier, happy singing.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because if you have happier, happy singing,

happier是比较级，前面不需要冠词a。

× Sounds. And the other will. Be happier than before.

✓ the sounds, others will be happier than before.

句子断裂，缺少连贯性。应合并为完整句子，others指其他人。