Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite short and has some grammatical errors. Try to give a complete sentence and add a reason with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. For example, avoid incomplete sentences and use connectors like 'because' properly.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, so I feel a bit shy when I sing in front of others.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is unclear. Use the correct tense and complete your sentences. Also, add more details to explain your experience clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school because we had music classes where we practiced singing songs together.

제안: You should try to understand the question and respond directly. If you don't understand, you can ask the examiner to repeat or explain. Try to give a simple answer related to the question.

예시: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and enjoy listening to my singing.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to organize your ideas logically and use simple sentences with linking words. Explain why singing can bring happiness with clear reasons.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel peaceful and forget their sadness for a while.

× No, I don't. I don't like singing because.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like singing because my voice is not good.

The sentence 'I don't like singing because.' is incomplete and lacks the reason after 'because'. It should be connected to the following sentence to form a complete thought.

× Yes, I have been learned to sing in the primary school so.

✓ Yes, I learned to sing in primary school.

The phrase 'have been learned' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'learned'. Also, 'the primary school' should be 'primary school' without 'the' as it refers to school in general.

× We need to learn the music as the.

✓ We need to learn music as well.

The phrase 'as the' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'as well' to indicate addition.

× No, sorry, I don't. I don't know the question talk about.

✓ No, sorry, I don't understand the question.

The phrase 'I don't know the question talk about' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'I don't understand the question'.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing see not you have people peaceful get over the. The sad story.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing helps people feel peaceful and get over sad stories.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So when you said you can sing too? Truth, the sad.

✓ So when you sing, you can express the truth and overcome sadness.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be rephrased to make sense and relate to the previous sentence.