Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh những câu không có nghĩa và tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói bạn không thích hát vì bạn nghĩ mình hát không hay và không tự tin.

예시: I don't like singing because I think I am not good at it. When I try to sing, I feel uncomfortable and I don't enjoy it.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích rõ ràng lý do bạn chưa học hát, ví dụ như bạn bận học hoặc không có cơ hội học.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I have been busy with school and homework, and I didn't have time to take singing lessons.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy nói rõ bạn muốn hát cho ai và lý do tại sao, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: I want to sing for my mother and family because I want to express my love and gratitude to them through my singing.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích tại sao bạn nghĩ hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc, ví dụ như giúp thư giãn và giải trí sau một ngày làm việc.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy themselves after a long day of work.

× I don't like singing because I'm not Thailand for singing an A.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not talented at singing.

The original sentence misuses 'Thailand' instead of 'talented' and has incorrect pronoun usage. The correction replaces 'Thailand' with 'talented' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× In the chill I was.

✓ I was shy.

The phrase 'In the chill I was' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence that likely reflects the intended meaning.

× I was I'm a talent for singing but not icing it a best so very bad.

✓ I have some talent for singing but I am not good at it, so I am very bad.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect word forms like 'icing' and awkward phrasing. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't have ever learned how to sing because I know I don't Thailand for singing then, so I have busy in the school and homework.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I know I am not talented at singing, and I have been busy with school and homework.

The original sentence misuses 'don't have ever learned' instead of 'have never learned' and contains incorrect pronouns and verb forms. The correction uses the correct present perfect negative form and clarifies the sentence.

× I want to sing for the mother and family because.

✓ I want to sing for my mother and family because.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the mother' instead of 'my mother'. The correction uses the possessive pronoun 'my' to indicate specific family members.

× I want give the hurt the singing lyric far to mom and dad in.

✓ I want to give the heartfelt singing lyrics to mom and dad.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Give you the. The love for you.

✓ I want to give you my love.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× Yes, I think singing can bring him before the old pupil, because singing is.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to old people because singing is

The original sentence misuses 'him before the old pupil' which is unclear. The correction replaces it with 'happiness to old people' to make sense in context.

× So relaxed and fun, enjoy.

✓ so relaxing and fun to enjoy.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. The correction completes the phrase to be grammatically correct.

× After one day. One day work.

✓ after a day's work.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. The correction provides a concise and correct phrase.