Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như câu "I can't think well" không rõ nghĩa trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý của mình rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't enjoy singing very much because I have limited musical ability. However, I enjoy listening to others sing because it makes me feel happy.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "we was" nên là "we were" và câu "which was classed about five years" không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I was taught singing for about five years when I was in primary school, but I have to say that my results were not very good.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và có lỗi lặp từ "listen listen". Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm lý do hoặc cảm xúc của mình để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

예시: I'm not very keen on music, but if I had to choose, I would sing for my family because they always support me and enjoy my singing.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ "bring happy need to hapiness" không đúng. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

예시: In my opinion, singing is a way to express our emotions. For people who love music, singing definitely brings happiness to them.

× I don't enjoy singing very much because.

✓ I don't enjoy singing very much because my music ability is very limited and I can't think well.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' which is a subordinating conjunction that requires a main clause to complete the thought. The sentence should be combined with the following clause to form a complete sentence.

× My music ability is very limited and I can't think well.

✓ My musical ability is very limited and I can't think well.

The word 'music' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'ability'. The correct adjective form is 'musical'.

× I do like listening to people singing 'cause I feel that there have been very happy to do that.

✓ I do like listening to people singing because I feel that they are very happy to do that.

The phrase 'there have been' is incorrect here. The correct pronoun is 'they' to refer to people, and the verb should be 'are' to indicate present state. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness.

× Yes, we were taught singing when we was in primary school, which was classed about five years, but I have to say that the results was not very good.

✓ Yes, we were taught singing when we were in primary school, which lasted about five years, but I have to say that the results were not very good.

The subject 'we' requires the verb 'were' (not 'was') for past tense plural. Also, 'classed' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lasted' to indicate duration. 'Results' is plural, so the verb should be 'were'.

× I'm not very keen on music, so if I had to choose, maybe my family would like to listen listen to my singing.

✓ I'm not very keen on music, so if I had to choose, maybe my family would like to listen to my singing.

The word 'listen' is repeated twice by mistake. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× Well, in my opinion, singing is a way that we can use to express our emotion.

✓ Well, in my opinion, singing is a way that we can use to express our emotions.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to various feelings in general.

× So to the people who love music, singing is definitely the way to bring happy need to hapiness to them.

✓ So to the people who love music, singing is definitely the way to bring happiness to them.

The phrase 'bring happy need to hapiness' is incorrect and unclear. The correct noun is 'happiness'. The sentence should be simplified to 'bring happiness to them'.