Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
수험생
I love eating chocolate and I have a sweet tooth. Uh, yeah. I do love hidden chocolate because I have a sweet tooth. Uh it, you know.
시험관
How often do you eat chocolate?
수험생
Even though I love chocolate, I don't often eat chocolate since I have pimples and acne on my face. Uh yeah. And because of it I'm an isotretinoin uh, and since chocolate is not good for acne, I don't eat it much.
시험관
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
수험생
Yes, I used to eat chocolate often when I was a kid. Uh, and also my dad and brother used to buy me a lot of chocolate because I used to love it. But since after teenage, since teenage, as my skin started deteriorating, even they stopped it.
시험관
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
수험생
There are different types of chocolate, such as white chocolate, milk chocolate, dark chocolate, etcetera. And different people have different teasers and uh, since there are lots of type, I think that is why people love chocolate. Also, it's very sweet or uh, you know, dark chocolate. It's, it's a bit bitter, but it's healthy. So it has its own.
시험관
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
수험생
My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk chocolate. I also do like Oreo chocolate mixed with milk chocolate of Cadbury. Uh, I just ate it a few months ago. Even though my skin is deteriorating, uh, I don't mind because I love chocolate.
시험관
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
수험생
Yes it is if the person you're gifting it gifting chocolates to love chocolate. I think you should give them chocolates because my boyfriend gave it to me on Valentine's Day as a gift.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'. Try to give a clear and concise response without repeating the same idea. Also, avoid filler words to sound more natural and confident.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because I have a sweet tooth and it satisfies my cravings.
How often do you eat chocolate?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is relevant but includes filler words and some unclear phrasing. Try to structure your answer clearly and avoid fillers. Also, explain briefly why you avoid chocolate to make your answer more informative.
예시: Although I love chocolate, I rarely eat it because it worsens my acne, and I am currently taking medication for my skin.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer has good content but is a bit unclear and contains filler words. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Make your sentences more fluent and clear.
예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a child because my dad and brother bought it for me. However, after I became a teenager and my skin started to deteriorate, they stopped giving me chocolate.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer has good points but is somewhat disorganized and contains filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'you know'. Also, clarify your points about taste and health benefits.
예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it comes in many varieties like white, milk, and dark chocolate. Different people prefer different types, and while milk chocolate is sweet, dark chocolate has a slightly bitter taste and is considered healthy.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is good but includes filler words and some unclear phrasing. Try to be more concise and avoid fillers. Also, explain briefly why you like these flavours to enrich your answer.
예시: My favourite flavour is milk chocolate because it is smooth and creamy. I also enjoy Cadbury's Oreo chocolate, which combines the sweetness of milk chocolate with crunchy cookies.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid repeating words and try to give a reason or example to support your opinion.
예시: Yes, chocolate makes a good gift if the person likes it. For example, my boyfriend gave me chocolates on Valentine's Day, which I really appreciated.
문법
× since there are lots of type, I think that is why people love chocolate
✓ since there are lots of types, I think that is why people love chocolate
The word 'type' is countable and plural here, so it should be 'types' instead of 'type' after 'lots of'. 'Lots of' requires a plural noun when referring to countable items.
× Yes it is if the person you're gifting it gifting chocolates to love chocolate
✓ Yes, it is if the person you're gifting chocolates to loves chocolate
The sentence has redundant words 'it gifting' and incorrect verb agreement. Also, 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' not 'love'. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and matches subject-verb agreement.
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