Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'makes me like refreshing' 대신 'makes me feel refreshed'로 수정하고, 중복된 표현을 줄여 간결하게 답변하세요. 예를 들어, 이유를 명확히 하고 문장을 3~4개로 제한하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I love eating chocolate because it makes me feel refreshed and gives me energy. Also, I really enjoy its sweet taste.

제안: 문법 오류와 중복된 표현이 많습니다. 'I enjoy to eat' 대신 'I enjoy eating'을 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요. 또한, 'milk chocolate'을 반복하지 말고, 선호하는 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

예시: I usually eat chocolate about three times a week. I prefer milk or white chocolate because they have a softer taste, which makes me happier than dark chocolate.

제안: 문장이 매우 혼란스럽고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'when I was killed'는 'when I was a kid'로 수정해야 하며, 부모님의 금지 이유와 빈도를 명확히 표현하세요. 간결하고 명확한 문장 구성이 필요합니다.

예시: Actually, when I was a kid, my parents didn't allow me to eat candy or chocolate often. So, I only ate chocolate about once a month.

제안: 답변이 논리적이지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 이유를 순서대로 명확하게 제시하고, 'divers pipes' 대신 'various types'와 같은 적절한 표현을 사용하세요. 연결어를 활용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and sweet. Also, it can be used in many desserts like muffins and cakes, which makes it very versatile.

제안: 'malt cha chocolate'과 'multi chocolate'의 표현이 불명확합니다. 좋아하는 맛을 정확히 표현하고, 문법 오류를 수정하세요. 또한, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

예시: My favorite flavors are malt chocolate and milk chocolate because dark chocolate sometimes tastes bitter to me. Milk chocolate is softer and makes me happy.

제안: 문장이 어색하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 초콜릿을 선물하는 이유와 그 의미를 명확히 설명하고, 문법과 표현을 개선하세요.

예시: Yes, I think giving chocolate as a gift is a good idea. For example, on Valentine's Day, couples exchange chocolates to show their affection, which strengthens their relationship.

× I love to eat chocolate because chocolate makes me like refreshing and I get energy in that food and of course I like that taste too.

✓ I love eating chocolate because chocolate makes me feel refreshed and I get energy from that food and of course I like the taste too.

The phrase 'makes me like refreshing' is incorrect. The verb 'make' followed by an object should be followed by the base form of the verb or an adjective. Here, 'feel refreshed' is correct. Also, 'get energy in that food' should be 'get energy from that food' to use the correct preposition.

× I love to eat chocolate because chocolate makes me like refreshing and I get energy in that food and of course I like that taste too.

✓ I love eating chocolate because chocolate makes me feel refreshed and I get energy from that food and of course I like the taste too.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'get energy'. The correct preposition is 'from' to indicate the source of energy.

× I enjoy to eat chocolate so I ate like 3 * a week and I definitely feel like more milk, milk chocolate or milk chocolate than dark chocolate because that tastes more soft and I prefer to eat white chocolate more.

✓ I enjoy eating chocolate so I eat it about 3 times a week and I definitely prefer milk chocolate more than dark chocolate because it tastes softer and I prefer to eat white chocolate more.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'eating' not the infinitive 'to eat'. Also, 'ate' is past tense but the question is about frequency, so present tense 'eat' is appropriate. 'More soft' should be 'softer' for correct comparative adjective usage.

× I enjoy to eat chocolate so I ate like 3 * a week and I definitely feel like more milk, milk chocolate or milk chocolate than dark chocolate because that tastes more soft and I prefer to eat white chocolate more.

✓ I enjoy eating chocolate so I eat it about 3 times a week and I definitely prefer milk chocolate more than dark chocolate because it tastes softer and I prefer to eat white chocolate more.

The verb 'ate' is past tense but the question asks about current frequency, so present tense 'eat' is correct.

× I enjoy to eat chocolate so I ate like 3 * a week and I definitely feel like more milk, milk chocolate or milk chocolate than dark chocolate because that tastes more soft and I prefer to eat white chocolate more.

✓ I enjoy eating chocolate so I eat it about 3 times a week and I definitely prefer milk chocolate more than dark chocolate because it tastes softer and I prefer to eat white chocolate more.

'More soft' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'soft' is 'softer'.

× Actually when I was killed my parents prohibited to eat candy or chocolate, so I can't eat chocolate frequently.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, my parents prohibited me from eating candy or chocolate, so I couldn't eat chocolate frequently.

'Was killed' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'was a kid'. Also, 'prohibited to eat' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prohibited me from eating'. 'Can't' should be past tense 'couldn't' to match the past context.

× Actually when I was killed my parents prohibited to eat candy or chocolate, so I can't eat chocolate frequently.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, my parents prohibited me from eating candy or chocolate, so I couldn't eat chocolate frequently.

The verb 'prohibit' is followed by 'someone from doing something', so 'prohibited me from eating' is correct.

× Actually when I was killed my parents prohibited to eat candy or chocolate, so I can't eat chocolate frequently.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, my parents prohibited me from eating candy or chocolate, so I couldn't eat chocolate frequently.

The sentence lacks the object pronoun 'me' after 'prohibited'. It should be 'prohibited me from eating'. Also, 'was killed' is incorrect; it should be 'was a kid'.

× So maybe I really like not often.

✓ So maybe I really didn't like it often.

The sentence is unclear and uses present tense 'like' when referring to past habits. It should be past tense 'didn't like' to match the context.

× They like 1 * a month.

✓ I liked it about once a month.

'They like 1 * a month' is unclear and incorrect. The speaker likely means 'I liked it about once a month'.

× I usually ate chocolate.

✓ I usually ate chocolate.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× They prohibit my chocolate fish.

✓ They prohibited me from eating chocolate candy.

'They prohibit my chocolate fish' is unclear and incorrect. Likely intended meaning is 'They prohibited me from eating chocolate candy'.

× Chocolate is first taste is so good and 2nd sweet things always famous around the people I think.

✓ Chocolate's first taste is so good and secondly, sweet things are always popular among people, I think.

The original sentence has structural issues and unclear phrasing. It needs reordering and proper connectors for clarity.

× And secondly and thirdly, that can change divers desserts so we can eat chocolate muffins and chocolate cakes.

✓ Secondly and thirdly, it can be used in various desserts, so we can eat chocolate muffins and chocolate cakes.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and redundant here. 'Divers' is incorrect; 'various' is correct. 'That' should be 'it' referring to chocolate.

× So we really like divers pipes.

✓ So we really like various types.

'Divers pipes' is incorrect; likely intended 'various types' or 'various kinds'.

× My favorite flavor is malt cha chocolate and milk chocolate because sometimes I felt not good taste in the dark chocolate.

✓ My favorite flavors are malt chocolate and milk chocolate because sometimes I feel that dark chocolate doesn't taste good.

'Felt not good taste' is incorrect; should be 'feel that dark chocolate doesn't taste good'. Also, 'flavor' should be plural 'flavors' when listing more than one.

× My favorite flavor is malt cha chocolate and milk chocolate because sometimes I felt not good taste in the dark chocolate.

✓ My favorite flavors are malt chocolate and milk chocolate because sometimes I feel that dark chocolate doesn't taste good.

The verb 'felt' is past tense but the statement is about a general feeling, so present tense 'feel' is appropriate.

× But milk chocolate and multi chocolate is so soft and it makes me so happy.

✓ But milk chocolate and malt chocolate are so soft and they make me very happy.

'Multi chocolate' is likely a typo for 'malt chocolate'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' for plural subject. 'So happy' can be improved to 'very happy'.

× But milk chocolate and multi chocolate is so soft and it makes me so happy.

✓ But milk chocolate and malt chocolate are so soft and they make me very happy.

The subject is plural ('milk chocolate and malt chocolate'), so the verb should be plural 'are' and pronoun 'they'.

× Though I more prefer to eat milk chocolate.

✓ Though I prefer to eat milk chocolate more.

The adverb 'more' should come after the verb phrase 'prefer to eat' for correct word order.

× Yeah. So like Valentine Day by today each couple give and take their chocolates and I think that means really good impact on their relationship.

✓ Yes. On Valentine's Day, couples give and receive chocolates, and I think that has a really good impact on their relationship.

'Give and take' is informal; 'give and receive' is more appropriate. 'Means really good impact' should be 'has a really good impact'. Also, 'Valentine Day by today' is incorrect; 'On Valentine's Day' is correct.

× And I like you, that means chocolate, please.

✓ And I like you, so that means chocolate, please.

The sentence is unclear and likely a mistranslation. 'I like you' is unrelated; 'so' is a better conjunction than 'that' here.

× So that is really, I think a special event to the friends or couples.

✓ So I think that is really a special event for friends or couples.

The sentence structure is awkward and needs reordering for clarity.