Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và câu dài không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and makes me feel happy. It is my favorite treat.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và tránh nói quá dài dòng hoặc không rõ ràng. Hãy nói về tần suất ăn chocolate một cách cụ thể và tự nhiên.

예시: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a day, sometimes even three bars. It has become a part of my daily routine.

제안: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng ngữ pháp đúng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thói quen ăn chocolate khi còn nhỏ, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. I enjoyed it during meals and as snacks because it was my favorite.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn, tránh nói lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích lý do tại sao chocolate được yêu thích trên thế giới một cách logic và tự nhiên.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and is made from cacao beans. It also helps improve people's mood and makes them feel happy.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "tension" và giải thích hương vị yêu thích một cách cụ thể và tự nhiên.

예시: My favorite flavor is dark milk chocolate with 50% cacao because it is not too sweet and has a rich taste.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do tại sao chocolate là món quà tốt, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people like it. It is affordable and perfect for occasions like Valentine's Day.

× I am a children and every children love chocolate.

✓ I am a child and every child loves chocolate.

The word 'children' is plural, so it cannot be used with 'I am' which requires a singular noun. Also, 'every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'children' should be 'child'. The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'every child'.

× every children love chocolate.

✓ every child loves chocolate.

The subject 'every child' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I also like that and not only my favorite, it's only my lovely my the most thing that I love to eat.

✓ I also like it and not only is it my favorite, it's also the thing I love to eat the most.

The sentence has several issues including incorrect pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'That' should be 'it' to refer to chocolate. The phrase 'my lovely my the most thing' is incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'the thing I love to eat the most' for clarity and correctness.

× Sometimes even 2 times a day I can eat two or three bars a day Simple, no problem with me and I think it's my dinner routine.

✓ Sometimes, even twice a day, I eat two or three bars. It's simple, no problem for me, and I think it's part of my dinner routine.

The modal verb 'can' is unnecessary here; the simple present tense 'eat' is more appropriate to describe habitual actions. Also, '2 times' should be 'twice' and the sentence needs punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, of course I can eat it every day, every night, every lunch and every dinner, every time, everywhere.

✓ Yes, of course I could eat it every day, every night, every lunch, and every dinner, every time, everywhere.

The question is about past habits, so the past tense modal 'could' is appropriate instead of 'can'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I love it so much and my mom also know that I love it so bad. Me for a lot.

✓ I love it so much and my mom also knows that I love it very much. I eat it a lot.

The verb 'know' should be 'knows' to agree with 'my mom'. 'So bad' is incorrect in this context; 'very much' is appropriate. 'Me for a lot' is ungrammatical and should be replaced with 'I eat it a lot' to convey the intended meaning.

× Because that taste is very nice.

✓ Because the taste is very nice.

'That taste' is awkward here; 'the taste' is more appropriate to refer to the general taste of chocolate.

× It's made from cacao. Cacao bean.

✓ It's made from cacao beans.

The phrase 'Cacao bean' is a fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And it's help way to have a good mood to improve our our emotion good for.

✓ And it helps to improve our mood and emotions.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'It's help way' should be 'it helps'. 'Our our emotion good for' is incorrect; it should be 'our mood and emotions'.

× I love milk dark chocolate with 50% of cacao.

✓ I love dark milk chocolate with 50% cacao.

The order of adjectives is incorrect; 'dark milk chocolate' is the correct order. Also, 'of' is unnecessary after '50%'.

× That taste is not really milk, not really sweet and very tension.

✓ That taste is not very milky, not very sweet, and very intense.

'Milk' should be 'milky' to describe taste. 'Very tension' is incorrect; 'very intense' is appropriate to describe flavor strength.

× Yes, of course, because everyone loves chocolate and it's cheap and useful.

✓ Yes, of course, because everyone loves chocolate and it's cheap and practical.

'Useful' is not appropriate to describe chocolate; 'practical' or 'suitable' fits better in this context.

× Everyone love that.

✓ Everyone loves that.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'loves'.

× So that's suitable to make a gift and everyone love to give it to their lover in Valentine Woman Day.

✓ So that's suitable as a gift, and everyone loves to give it to their loved ones on Valentine's Day.

'Suitable to make a gift' is awkward; 'suitable as a gift' is better. 'Everyone love' should be 'everyone loves'. 'Lover in Valentine Woman Day' is incorrect; 'loved ones on Valentine's Day' is appropriate.