Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达相同意思，如“chocolate is very delicious and so charming”以及“chocolate can brings me very happiness and pleasure”表达重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法错误，如“can brings”应为“can bring”。

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and brings me happiness. It also reminds me of many happy memories from my childhood.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“upset with black chocolate”不符合语境，应表达喜欢或不喜欢。建议使用连贯的句子表达频率和喜好，并避免重复。

예시: I usually eat chocolate about four times a week. I especially like the classic milk chocolate flavor because it tastes sweet and creamy.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“eat”应为“ate”，“it's and their outlook outlooks”重复且不通顺。建议简洁表达过去习惯，并用连贯句子描述细节。

예시: Yes, I ate a lot of chocolate when I was a kid because my mother often bought me many kinds. They were delicious and looked very attractive.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，如“it attracted, it attracts”重复且时态混乱。建议用连贯的句子说明原因，并避免简单重复。

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and looks appealing. It attracts people of all ages because of its sweet flavor and attractive appearance.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“because I tasted them once many times”表达不清，句子未完成。建议明确表达喜欢的口味并给出理由，句子完整。

예시: I like many chocolate flavors, especially classic milk and dark chocolate, because they have rich and smooth tastes that I enjoy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“buy many chocolate as gifts send to”应调整为“buy many chocolates as gifts to give to”。建议用更自然的表达说明送巧克力的原因和意义。

예시: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift. I often buy chocolates to give to my close friends, classmates, and parents because it brings happiness to everyone.

× I think chocolate can brings me very happiness and pleasure.

✓ I think chocolate can bring me great happiness and pleasure.

动词can后面应接动词原形，不能加-s或-ing形式。这里应使用bring而不是brings。

× It gives me so many unforgettable memories since I was a child.

✓ It has given me so many unforgettable memories since I was a child.

memories是复数，前面的动词时态应与时间状语一致，使用现在完成时更合适。

× I really upset with black chocolate, especially the black chocolate.

✓ I really like dark chocolate, especially black chocolate.

upset通常表示不高兴，不适合表达喜欢。应使用like。

× It's classical milk flavor is my also my favorite flavor.

✓ Its classic milk flavor is also my favorite flavor.

形容词顺序错误，且重复使用my。应改为Its classic milk flavor is also my favorite flavor。

× So I really fond of chocolate.

✓ So I am really fond of chocolate.

fond是形容词，需用be动词连接。

× I definitely eat a lot of chocolate when I was a kid because when I was a kid my mother always bought me many chocolates.

✓ I definitely ate a lot of chocolate when I was a kid because my mother always bought me many chocolates.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，eat应改为ate。

× They are all delicious and it's and their outlook outlooks are very beautiful and gorgeous.

✓ They are all delicious and their appearances are very beautiful and gorgeous.

outlook通常指观点，描述外观应使用appearances，且复数形式。

× It attracted, it attracts almost everyone around the world, so I think chocolate is better.

✓ It attracts almost everyone around the world, so I think chocolate is better.

句子中attracted不合适，保持时态一致使用现在时attracts。

× I tasted them once many times I think that they they are all very.

✓ I have tasted them many times and I think that they are all very good.

时态不正确，应使用现在完成时have tasted，且句子不完整需补充。

× I often buy many chocolate as gifts send to my close friends and classmates, even my parents.

✓ I often buy many chocolates as gifts to send to my close friends and classmates, even my parents.

chocolate应使用复数形式chocolates，且表达更完整。

× Chocolate as a gift is is very great and happy for everyone.

✓ Chocolate as a gift is very nice and makes everyone happy.

happy是形容词，不能直接修饰gift，应改为makes everyone happy。

× I think it's meaning.

✓ I think it has meaning.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，应补充has。