Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and natural, but it could be more effective by avoiding redundancy and adding a bit more detail. For example, instead of repeating 'chocolates' twice, you could mention why you like chocolate or how it makes you feel.

예시: Yes, I absolutely love eating chocolate because it satisfies my sweet tooth and lifts my mood. I usually enjoy it at least once a week as a treat.

제안: Good answer with relevant details and a linking phrase. To improve, you could make the sentence more concise and use a smoother linking word to enhance coherence.

예시: I eat chocolate at least once a week; however, since I'm trying to cut down on sugar, I've switched to sugar-free dark chocolate.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains a small grammatical error and could be clearer. Try to correct the grammar and add a linking word to improve flow.

예시: I didn't eat much chocolate as a kid because my parents were quite strict about what I consumed, so they rarely bought sweets for me.

제안: Your answer is good and provides specific reasons. To improve, avoid starting sentences with 'And' and use linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because people enjoy its sweet taste along with the occasional bitter aftertaste. Moreover, its variety in shapes, sizes, flavors, and additions like nuts and fruits makes it appealing to many.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has minor errors and could be more natural. Use 'especially' instead of 'specially' and avoid repeating 'chocolate' unnecessarily. Adding a reason would enrich your answer.

예시: My favorite chocolate flavor is butterscotch, especially the Snickers brand, because I love the combination of sweet and nutty tastes.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid using both 'in addition' and 'for example' together. Also, clarify the last sentence for better impact.

예시: Yes, chocolate makes a great gift because most people love it, making it a safe choice. For instance, whenever someone gives me chocolate, it really makes my day.

× Yes, I'm absolutely obsessed with eating chocolates.

✓ Yes, I'm absolutely obsessed with eating chocolate.

The word 'chocolate' is generally used as an uncountable noun when referring to the substance in general. Using 'chocolates' implies individual pieces or types, but here the general substance is meant, so 'chocolate' is correct.

× I guess I at least eat chocolates once a week.

✓ I guess I at least eat chocolate once a week.

Same as above, 'chocolate' is uncountable when referring to the substance in general, so 'chocolates' should be 'chocolate'.

× I eat chocolates at least once a week, but since I'm trying to reduce my sugar intake now, I have switched to eating sugar free dark chocolate.

✓ I eat chocolate at least once a week, but since I'm trying to reduce my sugar intake now, I have switched to eating sugar-free dark chocolate.

Again, 'chocolate' is uncountable here. Also, 'sugar free' should be hyphenated as 'sugar-free' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× I don't think I used to eat chocolate that much when I was a kid since my parents were quite strict regarding what I consumed and they really bought any sweets for me.

✓ I don't think I used to eat chocolate that much when I was a kid since my parents were quite strict regarding what I consumed and they really didn't buy any sweets for me.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary 'didn't' to form the negative past tense. 'They really bought any sweets' is incorrect; it should be 'they really didn't buy any sweets'.

× I'm very fond of the butterscotch flavor of the chocolate, specially chocolate of the Snicker brand.

✓ I'm very fond of the butterscotch flavor of the chocolate, especially chocolate of the Snickers brand.

'Specially' means 'in a special manner' but the correct word here is 'especially' meaning 'particularly'. Also, the brand name is 'Snickers', not 'Snicker'.

× I'm very fond of the butterscotch flavor of the chocolate, specially chocolate of the Snicker brand.

✓ I'm very fond of the butterscotch flavor of the chocolate, especially chocolate of the Snickers brand.

The brand name 'Snickers' is plural and should be used as such.