Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, use 'has' instead of 'have' for singular nouns and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like eating dark chocolate rather than white chocolate because I think white chocolate has too many calories.

제안: Try to give a more direct and fluent answer without filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use a more natural expression for frequency.

예시: I usually eat chocolate about once a week.

제안: Improve grammar by using the correct verb form 'to eat' and try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I loved eating chocolate because it was so sweet and it made me very happy.

제안: Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points more naturally.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and delicious, so many people enjoy it.

제안: Be careful with grammar, such as subject-verb agreement and avoid repeating words. Also, try to use linking words to improve flow.

예시: My favorite flavor is dark chocolate because it contains no added sugar and very few calories, which makes it healthier.

제안: Try to avoid filler words and improve grammar by using correct verb forms. Also, organize your ideas clearly with linking words.

예시: I don't think chocolate is always a good gift because it has many calories and is not very healthy. However, dark chocolate can be a better option as a gift.

× Yes, I like eating dark chocolate, not white chocolate because I think white chocolate have so many calories.

✓ Yes, I like eating dark chocolate, not white chocolate because I think white chocolate has so many calories.

The subject 'white chocolate' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× Umm, almost one day in a week.

✓ Umm, almost one day a week.

The phrase 'one day in a week' is awkward; the correct expression is 'one day a week' to indicate frequency.

× When I was a kid I loved eat chocolate because it is so sweet and it makes me so happy.

✓ When I was a kid I loved eating chocolate because it is so sweet and it makes me so happy.

After 'loved', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('eating') to indicate the activity enjoyed.

× In today's world, chocolate is popular around the world because it is so sweet and delicious and people love this.

✓ In today's world, chocolate is popular around the world because it is so sweet and delicious and people love it.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; 'it' should be used to refer back to 'chocolate'.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it contains no added sugar and very few calories which make makes it healthier.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it contains no added sugar and very few calories which make it healthier.

The verb 'make' should agree with the plural subject 'very few calories'; 'makes' is incorrect here.

× I don't think so because chocolate have many calories and it is no, uh, healthy.

✓ I don't think so because chocolate has many calories and it is not, uh, healthy.

'Chocolate' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'no healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'not healthy'.