Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达有些错误，如"things that's"应为"things that are"，建议注意主谓一致和定语从句的正确使用。同时，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate, especially dark chocolate in cakes, because I prefer less sweet flavors.

제안: 回答较为重复且表达不够流畅，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复句式。可以用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I don't have a fixed schedule for eating chocolate; it really depends on my mood. Sometimes I buy it when I feel like having a treat.

제안: 语法错误较多，如"things that's"应为"things that were"，"I got a lot of problem of my teeth"表达不准确，建议学习正确的时态和表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: I used to eat chocolate every day when I was a child because I loved sweet things. However, this caused me to have some dental problems.

제안: 词汇使用不当，如"fraudulent flavors"应为"varied flavors"或"rich flavors"。建议注意词汇的准确性，并且回答内容可以更具体。

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it has rich flavors and can be used in many dishes like cakes, mousse, and other desserts.

제안: 表达较为自然，但"cool sense"用词不够准确，建议使用更地道的表达，如"refreshing taste"。同时可以增加一些具体描述。

예시: My favorite flavor is mint chocolate because it has a refreshing taste that always lifts my mood.

제안: 语法错误较多，如"child often like"应为"children often like"，"elderlies doesn't prefer"应为"elderly people don't prefer"。建议注意复数形式和主谓一致。

예시: It depends on the person. Chocolate is a good gift for children because they often like sweet things, but it might not be suitable for elderly people who usually prefer less sweet gifts.

× I really like chocolate, especially when it appears in cakes, and I prefer the bitter one to the sweet because I don't like things that's too sweet.

✓ I really like chocolate, especially when it appears in cakes, and I prefer the bitter ones to the sweet ones because I don't like things that are too sweet.

这里的 "one" 和 "things" 应该用复数形式，因为指的是多种甜的东西。"that's" 应该改为 "that are"，因为 "things" 是复数，谓语动词也要用复数形式。

× I would say there's no specific time when I want to eat, I'll go and buy it.

✓ I would say there is no specific time when I want to eat; I'll go and buy it.

"there's" 是 "there is" 的缩写，正式写作中应避免缩写，且句子中两个分句应用分号或句号分开，避免逗号连接两个独立分句。

× If I don't want then I won't buy it.

✓ If I don't want it, then I won't buy it.

缺少宾语 "it"，使句子不完整。

× I would say I used to eat chocolate everyday when I was a kid because at that time when I was young, I liked things that's really sweet, especially chocolate.

✓ I would say I used to eat chocolate every day when I was a kid because at that time when I was young, I liked things that were really sweet, especially chocolate.

"everyday" 是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词 "every day" 表示“每天”。"that's" 应改为 "that were"，因为 "things" 是复数，谓语动词也要用复数形式。

× At that time, I got a problem. I got a lot of problem of my teeth.

✓ At that time, I had a problem. I had a lot of problems with my teeth.

"got" 用于口语中表示“有”，正式写作中应使用 "had"。"problem" 应为复数 "problems"，因为 "a lot of" 后面接可数名词复数。"of my teeth" 应改为 "with my teeth"，表示“牙齿方面的问题”。

× I think it's because it has fraudulent flavors and it could be used in multiple dishes such as cakes, mousse and many other cuisines.

✓ I think it's because it has flavorful flavors and it can be used in multiple dishes such as cakes, mousse and many other cuisines.

"fraudulent" 意为“欺诈的”，用词错误，应改为 "flavorful" 表示“有味道的”。"could" 表示过去或假设，语境中应使用 "can" 表示一般现在时的能力。

× My favorite flavour is mint chocolate. I recommend this flavour to all of my friends because it has a cool sense and makes me have a good mood.

✓ My favorite flavor is mint chocolate. I recommend this flavor to all of my friends because it has a cool taste and makes me feel good.

"sense" 用于此处不合适，应改为 "taste" 表示“味道”。"makes me have a good mood" 结构不自然，应改为 "makes me feel good"。

× Like children I think it's a good gift because child often like sweet things.

✓ Like children, I think it's a good gift because children often like sweet things.

"child" 是单数，前文用复数 "children"，此处应保持一致，使用复数 "children"。

× But if it's for elderlies I think it's not a good choice because elderlies doesn't prefer things that's too sweet.

✓ But if it's for elderly people, I think it's not a good choice because elderly people don't prefer things that are too sweet.

"elderlies" 不是正确的复数形式，应使用 "elderly people"。谓语动词 "doesn't" 应改为复数形式 "don't"，因为主语是复数。"that's" 应改为 "that are"，因为 "things" 是复数。