Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I love eating chocolate. When I was a child, I used to eat a lot, but my parents didn't allow me because it's unhealthy. Nowadays, I try to limit my chocolate intake.

제안: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct expressions like 'I can't say no to Kit Kat chocolate'. Also, try to provide a clear frequency (e.g., daily, weekly) to answer 'how often'.

예시: I usually eat chocolate a few times a week because it's one of my favorite treats. Kit Kat has been my favorite since childhood, and I find it hard to resist.

제안: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and past tense forms. Avoid filler words and be more precise in your explanation.

예시: Yes, I used to eat chocolate often when I was a kid. At that time, I didn't know it was unhealthy. Even though my parents didn't allow me to eat much, I would cry if I didn't get any.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Use clear reasons and examples, and avoid vague phrases like 'wild chocolate'.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is delicious and often used to celebrate special occasions. Moreover, it is generally safe to eat, which makes it a favorite treat for many people.

제안: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'chocolate chocolate'. Use clear descriptions and correct sentence structure.

예시: My favorite flavor is dark chocolate because it tastes rich and not too sweet. I also like Kit Kat, which combines milk chocolate with crispy wafers.

제안: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, chocolate is a good gift if the person likes it. However, if they don't enjoy chocolate, it's better to choose a different gift instead.

× when I was child I used to eat more chocolate

✓ when I was a child I used to eat more chocolate

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. The correct phrase is 'when I was a child'.

× my parents does not let me eat more chocolate

✓ my parents do not let me eat more chocolate

The subject 'my parents' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' instead of 'does'. 'Does' is used with third person singular subjects. The correct form is 'my parents do not let me'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I usually try to not eat more chocolate

✓ I usually try not to eat much chocolate

The phrase 'try to not eat more chocolate' is awkward and 'more' is not appropriate here. 'Much' is better to express quantity in negative sentences. Also, 'try not to eat much chocolate' is the correct word order.

× it's one of my favorite, uh, things

✓ it's one of my favorite things

The comma after 'favorite' is unnecessary and breaks the flow. The phrase should be 'one of my favorite things' without a comma.

× Kit Kat is one of my favorite chocolate

✓ Kit Kat is one of my favorite chocolates

'Chocolate' here should be plural 'chocolates' because 'one of my favorite' refers to one item among many. The countable noun form is needed.

× I can't say no to cat chocolate

✓ I can't say no to Kit Kat chocolate

The phrase 'cat chocolate' seems to be a typo or mishearing of 'Kit Kat chocolate'. Correcting to 'Kit Kat chocolate' makes sense in context.

× I used to eat chocolate when I were a kid

✓ I used to eat chocolate when I was a kid

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'was' in past tense, not 'were'. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or subjunctive mood. This is a subject-verb agreement in past tense.

× Even my parents doesn't let me eat chocolate

✓ Even my parents don't let me eat chocolate

'Parents' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I don't know, uh, that it is not good for our health

✓ I didn't know that it was not good for our health

The sentence refers to past time ('when I were a kid'), so past tense should be used: 'didn't know' and 'was not good'. Mixing present tense with past context is incorrect.

× Wild chocolate is popular around the world because it is

✓ Well, chocolate is popular around the world because it is

'Wild chocolate' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence should start with 'Well, chocolate is popular...'. Also, 'because it is' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× It can be used as a celebration of something special

✓ It can be used to celebrate something special

The phrase 'used as a celebration' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'used to celebrate' to express purpose.

× it is more popular around

✓ it is more popular worldwide

The phrase 'more popular around' is incomplete. 'Around' needs an object like 'the world'. 'Worldwide' is a better adverb here.

× Kit Kat is one of my favorite chocolate because it's it tastes so delicious

✓ Kit Kat is one of my favorite chocolates because it tastes so delicious

'Chocolate' should be plural 'chocolates' as before. Also, 'it's it tastes' is redundant; only 'it tastes' is needed.

× it's not too sugary

✓ it's not too sugary

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is a mix of milk and chocolate chocolate

✓ It is a mix of milk and chocolate

The phrase 'chocolate chocolate' is redundant. Only one 'chocolate' is needed.

× it's not good idea if they don't like chocolate much

✓ it's not a good idea if they don't like chocolate much

The phrase 'not good idea' is missing the article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'not a good idea'.

× Often we can give uh, another gift instead of chocolate if they don't like chocolate

✓ Often we can give another gift instead of chocolate if they don't like chocolate

The sentence is correct except for the filler 'uh,' which can be omitted for clarity.