Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" kimi fasilələr var və cümlələr bir az qarışıqdır. Daha təbii və səlis olmaq üçün, fikirlərinizi qısa və aydın cümlələrlə ifadə edin. Məsələn, mövzunu birbaşa cavablayın və sonra səbəbləri əlavə edin.

예시: Yes, I really like eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and makes me happy. When I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to eat much chocolate, but now I enjoy it every day.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Daha aydın və səlis olmaq üçün, cümlələri düzgün qurun və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

예시: I used to eat chocolate every day, but now I limit myself to once a week because I have allergies and acne on my face and back.

제안: Cavabınızda fikirlər qarışıqdır və təkrarlamalar var. Daha aydın olmaq üçün, fikirlərinizi ardıcıl və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin.

예시: When I stayed with my grandparents, I ate a lot of chocolate. However, my parents only allowed me to eat chocolate once or twice a month.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha təbii və axıcı olmaq üçün, fikirlərinizi daha dəqiq və qısa ifadə edin.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and most people love it. However, some avoid it due to allergies or skin problems.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və natamam ifadələr var. Daha aydın olmaq üçün, fikirlərinizi tam cümlələrlə ifadə edin və əlavə məlumat verin.

예시: My favourite flavours are milk chocolate and white chocolate because I find dark chocolate too bitter.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha səlis və təbii olmaq üçün, fikirlərinizi daha qısa və aydın ifadə edin.

예시: Yes, chocolate is a good gift for informal occasions. For example, when visiting a teacher or relative, you can bring chocolates as a simple present.

× I eat chocolate everyday and I love.

✓ I eat chocolate every day and I love it.

The phrase 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common' or 'normal', but the correct adverb to indicate frequency is 'every day'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object after 'I love'. Adding 'it' clarifies the meaning.

× Actually before I was eating chocolate like every day but now I limited myself and I chocolate only once a week because I have allergies and also I have some acne on my face and on my and on my back.

✓ Actually, before I ate chocolate like every day but now I limit myself and I eat chocolate only once a week because I have allergies and also I have some acne on my face and on my back.

The past continuous 'was eating' is incorrect here; simple past 'ate' is appropriate for habitual past action. 'Limited' should be present tense 'limit' to match 'now'. The phrase 'I chocolate only once a week' is missing the verb 'eat'. Also, 'and on my and on my back' is redundant; 'on my back' suffices.

× Actually when I stayed with my grandparents I was eating so much chocolate but my parents didn't allow me to eat much.

✓ Actually, when I stayed with my grandparents, I ate so much chocolate but my parents didn't allow me to eat much.

The past continuous 'was eating' is not appropriate for a habitual past action; simple past 'ate' is correct here.

× Some people don't prefer to eat because they have some allergies or or some skin problems that's why they don't prefer.

✓ Some people don't prefer to eat it because they have allergies or some skin problems; that's why they don't prefer it.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by an object or 'to' plus verb. Here, 'prefer to eat' is incomplete without specifying what. Adding 'it' clarifies the object. Also, 'some allergies or or some skin problems' has a repeated 'or' and redundant 'some'.

× But usually all of them visual individuals love eating chocolate.

✓ But usually all of them, visual individuals, love eating chocolate.

The phrase 'visual individuals' is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly the speaker meant 'usual individuals' or 'most individuals'. The sentence structure is awkward; commas help clarify the meaning.

× I love milk chocolates or white chocolates because I don't like dark ones.

✓ I love milk chocolate or white chocolate because I don't like dark ones.

The nouns 'milk chocolate' and 'white chocolate' are uncountable and should not be pluralized. 'Dark ones' is acceptable as it refers to types of chocolate.

× Because for example when you go to a teacher's house or your like relatives house you can buy a pair of chocolates for like for as a gift.

✓ Because, for example, when you go to a teacher's house or your relatives' house, you can buy a box of chocolates as a gift.

The phrase 'your like relatives house' is incorrect; 'your relatives' house' is correct with possessive apostrophe. 'A pair of chocolates' is incorrect because chocolates are countable but usually given in boxes or bars, not pairs. Also, 'for like for as a gift' is redundant and incorrect; 'as a gift' suffices.