Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like chocolate using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant phrases.

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it helps me feel relaxed when I am nervous or stressed. Eating chocolate gives me comfort and makes me happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Please answer directly how often you eat chocolate, and explain briefly why. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unclear phrases.

예시: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a week, especially during stressful times, because it helps me feel better. I like eating it with milk as it tastes very good.

제안: Your answer has some good points but needs better grammar and clearer structure. Start with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'search has'.

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. For example, I used to go outside with my father and enjoy chocolates like Kit Kat and Dairy Milk, which were my favorites.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases. Try to explain clearly why chocolate is popular globally, giving reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and is used in many desserts like cakes. Also, many people enjoy chocolates like Kit Kat, which is famous in many countries.

제안: Your answer needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain why you like that flavour using linking words. Avoid incorrect phrases like 'comfort table under relaxed'.

예시: My favourite chocolate flavour is vanilla because it tastes smooth and sweet. Whenever I go out, I always choose this flavour as it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Please answer directly whether chocolate is a good gift, then explain why with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear brand names or phrases.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift, especially for girls, because many girls love sweets. In India, popular chocolate gifts include KitKat and Milkybar, which taste very good and are well-liked.

× Yes, I like the chocolates.

✓ Yes, I like chocolate.

In English, 'chocolate' is generally used as an uncountable noun when referring to the substance in general, so 'the chocolates' is incorrect here. Use 'chocolate' without 'the' or plural form when talking about it generally.

× Then I am very nervous and stressed.

✓ I feel very nervous and stressed then.

The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence places the adverb 'then' appropriately and uses 'feel' to express emotions properly.

× Why eat a chocolate to spill is relax and comfort table.

✓ Eating chocolate helps me relax and feel comfortable.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction uses proper verb forms and sentence structure to convey the intended meaning.

× I have one job grade once or twice a week during the periods because it's has 2 grams to relief and I eat the chocolate with milica it is very tasty.

✓ I eat chocolate once or twice a week during busy periods because it has 2 grams of relief, and I eat the chocolate with milk; it is very tasty.

The original sentence has multiple issues including incorrect quantifiers ('one job grade'), verb forms ('it's has'), and unclear phrases. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× Yes, I eat a lot of chocolates when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I ate a lot of chocolate when I was a kid.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the past time reference 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'chocolate' is uncountable here.

× I am going to outside the home with my father and eat the chocolate.

✓ I used to go outside the home with my father and eat chocolate.

The phrase 'going to outside' is incorrect; 'go outside' is the correct form. Also, past habitual action is better expressed with 'used to'.

× Search has Kit Kat and Dairy Milk.

✓ There were Kit Kat and Dairy Milk.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Using 'There were' correctly introduces the items present.

× It is my favorite chocolate when I was kid.

✓ It was my favorite chocolate when I was a kid.

The verb 'is' should be in past tense 'was' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'a kid' needs the article 'a'.

× There are a number of countries which the most previous gift of the angle, they make a chocolate cake and also different kind of chocolates.

✓ There are a number of countries where the most popular gift is chocolate; they make chocolate cake and different kinds of chocolates.

The original sentence misuses 'which' and has unclear phrases. The correction uses 'where' to indicate location and corrects noun forms.

× But according to my opinion, there are a mostly Kit Kat is a favorite of chocolate in the world and some others.

✓ But in my opinion, Kit Kat is mostly the favorite chocolate in the world, along with some others.

The phrase 'there are a mostly' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the opinion and corrects quantifier usage.

× My favorite chocolate flavor is Banila.

✓ My favorite chocolate flavor is Vanilla.

'Banila' is a misspelling of 'Vanilla', which is the correct adjective for the flavor.

× It's a good taste and when I am going to outside I always choose this flavor.

✓ It tastes good, and when I go outside, I always choose this flavor.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing. The correction uses proper verb forms and sentence structure.

× I feel comfort table under relaxed.

✓ I feel comfortable and relaxed.

'Comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, 'under relaxed' is incorrect; 'and relaxed' is appropriate.

× I think most of the girls like the gift chocolates rather than a boys because girls loves the chocolate and there are number of chocolates gifts available in India like a URL, KitKat, Gary Miller can such a Milky bolvar.

✓ I think most girls like gift chocolates more than boys because girls love chocolate, and there are a number of chocolate gifts available in India like Perk, KitKat, Cadbury, and Milky Bar.

The original sentence has multiple errors including quantifiers ('most of the girls'), verb agreement ('girls loves'), and incorrect brand names. The correction fixes these issues.

× There are very good taste an most of girls like this grip.

✓ They have a very good taste, and most girls like these gifts.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and nouns ('taste an most of girls', 'grip'). The correction uses proper quantifiers and nouns.