Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and sweet. It also cheers me up when I am feeling down.

제안: Make sure your answer directly addresses the question with clear frequency expressions. Avoid unrelated or unclear statements. Use simple linking words if needed.

예시: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a week, especially when I feel bored or need a quick treat.

제안: Answer the question clearly and avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases. Use simple sentences and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a kid because it was my favourite snack and helped me feel energetic when I was tired.

제안: Provide a clear reason why chocolate is popular and explain it with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and sweet. Also, it makes people feel happy and relaxed, which is why many children enjoy it.

제안: Be specific about your favourite flavour and explain why you like it. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Keep your answer natural and concise.

예시: My favourite flavour is milk chocolate because it is sweet and creamy. Eating it always makes me feel happy.

제안: Answer the question directly and provide clear reasons why chocolate makes a good gift. Use correct sentence structure and linking words.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a great gift because it is popular with all ages and suitable for occasions like birthdays and anniversaries.

× I absolutely love eating chocolates because when you go outside child I my favorite thing.

✓ I absolutely love eating chocolate because when you go outside, chocolate is my favorite thing.

The word 'chocolates' should be singular 'chocolate' when referring to the substance in general. Also, the original sentence is unclear and seems to miss some words; adding 'chocolate is' clarifies the meaning.

× I absolutely love eating chocolates because when you go outside child I my favorite thing.

✓ I absolutely love eating chocolate because when you go outside, chocolate is my favorite thing.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Adding necessary words and punctuation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's 2 eating chocolate.

✓ It's to eat chocolate.

The phrase 'It's 2 eating chocolate' is incorrect. The correct infinitive form is 'to eat' instead of '2 eating'.

× So now it is also I like to eat chocolate 'cause it is very delicious and sweet.

✓ So now, I also like to eat chocolate because it is very delicious and sweet.

The sentence structure is awkward and missing commas. Reordering and adding punctuation improves readability and correctness.

× I usually eat chocklate winner.

✓ I usually eat chocolate whenever I want.

The word 'chocklate' is a misspelling of 'chocolate'. Also, 'winner' seems incorrect in context; 'whenever I want' fits better.

× I feel very bored I and also I feel drawn to boot.

✓ I feel very bored, and also I feel drawn to it.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'drawn to boot'. Correcting to 'drawn to it' and adding commas improves clarity.

× Definitely wear.

✓ Definitely, yes.

'Wear' is incorrect here; likely intended 'were' or an affirmative response. Replacing with 'Definitely, yes.' fits the context.

× As a earlier mention, when I get tired I like to eat chocolate because it is my favorite.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, when I get tired, I like to eat chocolate because it is my favorite.

The phrase 'As a earlier mention' is incorrect; 'As I mentioned earlier' is the correct expression. Adding commas improves sentence flow.

× Speed is very delusion and black people.

✓ Its taste is very delicious and sweet.

The original sentence is nonsensical. Likely intended to say 'Its taste is very delicious and sweet.' Correcting adjectives and meaning is necessary.

× Well, chocolate is very popular among today's generation because it is very delicious and sweet.

✓ Well, chocolate is very popular among today's generation because it is very delicious and sweet.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Whenever some children eat it, they feel very. Good day ended. Relaxed.

✓ Whenever some children eat it, they feel very good, relaxed, and happy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× My favorite flavor is chocolate flavored becauses.

✓ My favorite flavor is chocolate because

The phrase 'chocolate flavored becauses' is incorrect. 'Because' is the correct conjunction here, and 'chocolate flavored' is redundant.

× I like to eat chocolate flavor.

✓ I like to eat chocolate-flavored chocolate.

The phrase 'chocolate flavor' is awkward; 'chocolate-flavored chocolate' or simply 'chocolate' is better.

× It is very. Sweet and delicious.

✓ It is very sweet and delicious.

The period after 'very' is incorrect; it should be a continuous phrase.

× When I eat it, it helps me to keep happy and legs.

✓ When I eat it, it helps me to stay happy and relaxed.

The phrase 'keep happy and legs' is incorrect. 'Stay happy and relaxed' is a proper expression.

× Oh no more days.

✓ Oh, nowadays,

The phrase 'Oh no more days' is incorrect. 'Oh, nowadays,' fits better to introduce the idea.

× It is popular among all generation because it is a great gift it to give anyone on their birthday.

✓ It is popular among all generations because it is a great gift to give anyone on their birthday.

'Generation' should be plural 'generations' to match 'all'. Also, 'a great gift it to give' is incorrect; corrected to 'a great gift to give'.

× A parties or anniversary's and so on.

✓ at parties, anniversaries, and so on.

The phrase 'A parties or anniversary's' is incorrect. Correct preposition and plural forms are needed: 'at parties, anniversaries'.