Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with correct grammar. For example, say "I don't like eating chocolate because it contains a lot of sugar, which is not good for our health."

예시: I don't like eating chocolate because it has a lot of sugar, which can be harmful to our health.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example, "I eat chocolate only when someone gives it to me, but I don't buy it myself."

예시: I usually eat chocolate only when someone gives it to me, and I don't buy it on my own.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has many errors. Try to say clearly, for example, "Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I didn't know it had a lot of sugar."

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I didn't know it contained a lot of sugar.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons, for example, "Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and makes people feel happy."

예시: I think chocolate is popular around the world because it tastes sweet and can make people feel happy and relaxed.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to say clearly, for example, "My favorite flavor is dark chocolate because it has less sugar than other types."

예시: My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it contains less sugar than other chocolates.

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs clearer structure and grammar. For example, say "Yes, chocolate is a good gift because many people like it."

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people enjoy eating it.

× Actually I don't really like eating chocolate because it is home for our health.

✓ Actually, I don't really like eating chocolate because it is harmful to our health.

The word 'home' is incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'harmful' to express that chocolate is bad for health.

× In chocolate there are so most server on the earth, so I'm not really it's verse becauses when we it's lots of sugars, so we have a sugar.

✓ Chocolate contains many preservatives on the earth, so I'm not sure it's good because it has lots of sugar, so we have sugar.

The phrase 'so most server' is incorrect; 'many preservatives' is the correct quantifier and noun. Also, 'it's verse' should be 'it's good' or 'it's bad' depending on meaning, and 'lots of sugars' should be 'lots of sugar' as sugar is uncountable.

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✓ I prefer to eat chocolate, so when someone gives me chocolate, I eat it at that time but not that much. I don't buy chocolate on my own, yeah.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear references; 'we someone' should be 'someone', 'talk late' is 'chocolate', and 'bring sock list' is unclear, corrected to 'buy chocolate'. Pronouns should clearly refer to the subject or object.

× Yes, I often talk later when I was kid because indicate I don't know there has lots of sugar on the chocolate, so I eat that Timelords are when I grow up poor and that time I feel so.

✓ Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I didn't know there was lots of sugar in chocolate, so I ate it. When I grew up, I felt differently.

The verb 'talk later' should be 'ate chocolate' in past tense. 'Was kid' needs an article 'a kid'. 'Indicate' is incorrect here and removed. 'Has' should be 'was' for singular 'lots of sugar'. 'Eat' changed to past tense 'ate'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× In my opinion, I doubled is popular around the old becaused some lots of chocolates are very sweet and you know it's very.

✓ In my opinion, chocolate is popular around the world because many chocolates are very sweet and, you know, it's very tasty.

'Doubled' is incorrect; likely meant 'chocolate'. 'Around the old' should be 'around the world'. 'Becaused' corrected to 'because'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I prefer of my favorite bra flavor of chocolate is. All. Dog talk late becauses in dark color chocolate there as no lots of sugar then other talk late so I prefer it to dark chocolate in sometimes.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because dark chocolate has less sugar than other chocolates, so I sometimes prefer it.

'Bra flavor' is incorrect, corrected to 'flavor'. 'All. Dog talk late' is 'dark chocolate'. 'There as no lots of sugar then other talk late' corrected to 'has less sugar than other chocolates'. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× Uhm, actually it is good to use on it has give to others because some people's like chocolate very much, so it is good for dad to give sock list some.

✓ Uhm, actually it is good to give chocolate to others because some people like chocolate very much, so it is good to give chocolate as a gift.

'Use on it has give' is incorrect; modal verb 'to give' is used properly here. 'Some people's' should be 'some people'. 'Dad to give sock list some' is unclear, corrected to 'give chocolate as a gift'. Modal verb usage and pronouns are corrected.