Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to form complete sentences and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide more specific reasons for your preference.

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it has a rich and creamy taste that I find very enjoyable. For example, after a long day, having a piece of dark chocolate helps me relax and boosts my mood.

제안: Provide a more detailed answer by specifying how many times per week and possibly why you choose that frequency. This will make your response more informative and natural.

예시: I usually eat chocolate two or three times a week, especially when I need a little treat or some energy.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and complete sentences. Also, explain a bit more about your childhood habit to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I used to eat chocolate every day when I was a child because I loved its sweet taste and it made me happy.

제안: Avoid short, repetitive sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons why chocolate is popular globally.

예시: In my view, chocolate is popular around the world because many people enjoy sweets, and chocolate has a unique, delicious taste that appeals to all ages.

제안: Form complete sentences and explain your preferences clearly. Use linking words to contrast your likes and dislikes.

예시: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate because it is sweet and creamy. I don't like dark chocolate, however, because I find it too bitter.

제안: Expand your answer by explaining why you think chocolate makes a good gift. Use linking words to add reasons and examples.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it is widely liked and can be shared easily. For example, giving a box of chocolates on special occasions shows thoughtfulness.

× Yes, I like eating chocolate because for me is so delicious and I love.

✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate because it is so delicious to me and I love it.

The original sentence lacks a subject for the clause 'for me is so delicious' and misses the object after 'I love'. Adding 'it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Rich and creamy taste.

✓ It has a rich and creamy taste.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Adding 'It has' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I eat chocolate every day when I. A child.

✓ I ate chocolate every day when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'eat' and is incomplete with 'I. A child.' Changing to past tense 'ate' and adding 'was' corrects the tense and sentence structure.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate. Is. Sweet.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is sweet.

The original sentence is fragmented with unnecessary full stops. Combining into one sentence corrects the structure.

× I don't like dark chocolate because is not delicious for me.

✓ I don't like dark chocolate because it is not delicious for me.

The subject 'it' is missing before 'is'. Adding 'it' corrects the third person singular subject-verb agreement.