Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain your reason with more natural and complete sentences. Avoid filler words like 'weird' which may confuse the listener. For example, say 'No, I don't like eating chocolate because I prefer less sugary foods.'

예시: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I prefer foods that are less sweet. I find chocolate too sugary for my taste, so I usually avoid it.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to answer directly with a simple sentence and add supporting details using linking words. For example, 'I rarely eat chocolate; maybe five times a year because I don't like sweets.'

예시: I rarely eat chocolate; maybe about five times a year because I don't enjoy sweet foods much.

제안: Make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, I ate chocolate often as a kid, but since I became an adult, I don't eat sweets frequently.'

예시: Yes, I ate chocolate often when I was a kid, but since I started adulting, I don't eat sweets very often.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. For example, 'Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes good and many people enjoy its sweet flavor.'

예시: Chocolate is popular around the world because it tastes delicious and many people enjoy its sweet and rich flavor.

제안: Try to organize your answer clearly with complete sentences. For example, 'Although I'm not a big fan of chocolate, I prefer dark chocolate because it is healthier and less sweet than regular chocolate.'

예시: Although I'm not a big fan of chocolate, I prefer dark chocolate because it is healthier and less sweet than regular chocolate.

제안: Your answer is mostly clear but can be improved by combining sentences and adding reasons. For example, 'Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because most people enjoy it, even though I don't.'

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because most people enjoy it, even though I don't like it myself.

× I'm not a fan of sugary food and.

✓ I'm not a fan of sugary food.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is a conjunction that requires a following clause. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× If I can remember, I also AM.

✓ If I can remember, I also am.

The phrase 'I also AM' is unclear and incomplete. Changing 'AM' to lowercase 'am' and clarifying the sentence structure is necessary, but since the meaning is unclear, the best correction is to keep 'I also am' as a grammatically correct phrase.

× Eight-year chocolates.

✓ I ate chocolates when I was eight years old.

The phrase 'Eight-year chocolates' is incomplete and unclear. It seems the student wants to say they ate chocolates at age eight. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence.

× From a chocolate.

✓ From chocolate.

The phrase 'From a chocolate' is incomplete and incorrect. Removing the article 'a' makes the phrase correct if it is part of a larger sentence.

× In one year, I just said. 5 chocolates.

✓ In one year, I just ate 5 chocolates.

The phrase 'I just said. 5 chocolates.' is incorrect. It should be 'I just ate 5 chocolates' to correctly express the action and quantity.

× But but when I started. Started thing.

✓ But when I started, started working.

The phrase is repetitive and incomplete. It should be corrected to a complete sentence indicating what the student started doing.

× When I start adulting.

✓ When I started adulting.

The verb tense should be past tense 'started' to match the past context.

× I don't. I often eat. Sweets.

✓ I don't often eat sweets.

The sentence is fragmented. Combining into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think at the different scent of us or in another fan of chocolate and it's weird.

✓ I think different people have different tastes, and some are not fans of chocolate, which is weird.

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× But I think. Chocolate is.

✓ But I think chocolate is popular.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding 'popular' completes the thought.

× I say I'm not fan of chocolate.

✓ I say I'm not a fan of chocolate.

The article 'a' is missing before 'fan'.

× I prefer more.

✓ I prefer it more.

The verb 'prefer' requires an object. Adding 'it' clarifies the sentence.

× What I prefer most is dark chocolate.

✓ What I prefer most is dark chocolate.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× And then the usual chocolate.

✓ And then the usual chocolate.

This sentence fragment is incomplete. It should be combined with the next sentence or completed.

× It's. Has a less sweet.

✓ It has less sweetness.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrect. The correction provides a grammatically correct sentence.

× Because.

✓ Because it is less sweet.

The word 'Because' alone is incomplete. It should be part of a complete sentence.

× Yes, of course.

✓ Yes, of course.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Everyone loves chocolates except me.

✓ Everyone loves chocolate except me.

The word 'chocolate' is an uncountable noun when referring to the substance in general, so 'chocolates' should be 'chocolate' here.

× But I think it's. A good gift to others.

✓ But I think it's a good gift for others.

The sentence is fragmented and the preposition 'to' should be 'for' when referring to giving gifts.