Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构简单且不完整，缺少清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and gives me energy. I especially enjoy dark chocolate as it is not too sweet.

제안: 回答简短，缺少细节和连贯性。建议用完整句子回答，并说明原因或具体频率。

예시: I eat chocolate almost every day, usually as a small snack in the afternoon to boost my mood.

제안: 句子不完整且语法错误，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明原因，并适当扩展细节。

예시: No, I did not often eat chocolate as a kid because my parents preferred me to eat healthier snacks.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性和具体内容，句子不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a rich and sweet flavor that many people enjoy. It also comes in many varieties to suit different tastes.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明喜欢的巧克力种类，并解释原因。

예시: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate with about 55% cocoa because it has a perfect balance of sweetness and bitterness.

제안: 回答过于简短且语法不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I think chocolate makes a good gift because it is delicious and most people enjoy receiving it.

× Not sweet. Many, much chocolate.

✓ Not sweet. Much chocolate.

这里“much”用于不可数名词“chocolate”，而“many”用于可数名词。巧克力是不可数名词，所以应使用“much”而非“many”。

× No, because my parents not.

✓ No, because my parents did not.

句子缺少谓语动词，且时态应为过去时。应补充助动词“did”并使用否定形式“did not”。

× Because it's very delicious. The flavor is. It's a good, it's fantastic, it's.

✓ Because it's very delicious. The flavor is good. It's fantastic.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和完整表达。应补充完整句子，使表达清晰连贯。

× Milk and about. 55% of chocolate.

✓ Milk and about 55% chocolate.

句子中“about”与数字“55%”应连贯表达，且“chocolate”作为不可数名词不需加“of”。

× Yes, it's a good.

✓ Yes, it's good.

“a good”后缺少名词，表达不完整。应去掉不必要的冠词“a”，直接使用形容词“good”。