Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えましょう。

예시: I don't like eating chocolate because I prefer sour and spicy foods over sweet ones. Therefore, I usually avoid sweet snacks like chocolate.

제안: 頻度を表現する際に、より自然な英語表現を使いましょう。また、文法の誤りを直し、簡潔に答えることが大切です。

예시: I eat chocolate about once a month, so I don't have many opportunities to enjoy it.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。過去の習慣について話す際は、時制に注意し、理由を明確に述べましょう。

예시: Yes, I used to eat a lot of chocolate when I was a kid. However, after I gained weight, I decided to stop eating it.

제안: 理由を述べる際に、文をつなげる接続詞を使い、論理的に話しましょう。また、語彙の選択を改善し、より自然な表現を心がけてください。

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and is easy to find. Also, it is available at various price ranges, from affordable to luxury, which attracts many people.

제안: 表現が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。味の特徴を説明する際は、正しい語彙を使い、簡潔に述べましょう。

예시: My favorite flavor of chocolate is matcha. It has a slight bitterness that makes me feel calm and relaxed.

제안: 理由を述べる際に、接続詞を適切に使い、文をつなげて話しましょう。また、表現を簡潔にし、自然な英語を心がけてください。

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a great gift because many people like it and can enjoy its taste.

× I I hate.

✓ I hate it.

The sentence lacks an object for the verb 'hate'. Adding 'it' clarifies what is hated, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× Sweet food since I I prefer sour and sour an hot food I often don't eat.

✓ I don't like sweet food since I prefer sour and hot food, which I often eat.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect adjective usage. Correcting the adjectives and sentence structure improves clarity and grammar.

× I often eat those kind of foods.

✓ I often eat those kinds of food.

'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types, and 'food' is uncountable, so 'foods' is less common here.

× I think I ate chocolate every month.

✓ I think I eat chocolate every month.

The question asks about current habits, so present tense 'eat' is appropriate instead of past tense 'ate'.

× Once in every month, so that's quite a less opportunity.

✓ Once every month, so that's quite a rare opportunity.

'Less' is incorrect here; 'rare' better describes infrequency. Also, 'once every month' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I ate a chocolate a lot when I work and when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I ate a lot of chocolate when I worked and when I was a kid.

'A chocolate' is incorrect; 'a lot of chocolate' is correct. Also, 'work' should be past tense 'worked' to match 'was a kid'.

× But once I got my. T thick.

✓ But once I got my teeth thick.

The sentence is unclear; assuming 'teeth thick' is intended, 'got' is past tense and correct, but the phrase needs correction for clarity.

× Then I decided not to eat chocolate anymore.

✓ Then I decided not to eat chocolate anymore.

This sentence is correct in past tense as it refers to a past decision.

× I think because it is delicious and. Easy to get.

✓ I think it's because it is delicious and easy to get.

Adding 'it's' clarifies the sentence structure; 'easy to get' is correct.

× Since that's a reasonable price and they have from the cheap one to the luxury 1.

✓ Since it is reasonably priced and they have options from cheap to luxury.

'That's a reasonable price' is awkward; 'it is reasonably priced' is better. 'They have from the cheap one to the luxury 1' is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× So I think those capability are accepting people to make it popular.

✓ So I think those qualities attract people and make it popular.

'Capability' should be plural 'qualities'; 'accepting people' is incorrect, 'attract people' is appropriate.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate it's is matcha flavor.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is matcha.

'It's is' is redundant; 'is' alone suffices. Also, 'matcha flavor' is simplified to 'matcha'.

× Much of Labor has on little bit of bitterness and that that makes me feel calm.

✓ Matcha has a little bit of bitterness, and that makes me feel calm.

'Much of Labor' is a mishearing of 'matcha flavor'; corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I think it is really good way to use chocolate as a gift to others since that's.

✓ Yes, I think it is a really good way to use chocolate as a gift for others since

'Gift to others' is better expressed as 'gift for others'; article 'a' is added before 'really good way'.

× Since many people like chocolate and they can enjoy their tastes.

✓ Many people like chocolate and can enjoy its taste.

'Since' is unnecessary here; 'their tastes' is vague, 'its taste' refers to chocolate specifically.