Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear, direct response to the question with a topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid asking the examiner questions and keep your answer concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it is sweet and delicious. I especially enjoy milk chocolate rather than dark chocolate. Although I usually avoid sweet foods, chocolate is an exception because of its rich flavor.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Provide a direct answer about the frequency of eating chocolate, using linking words to organize your ideas logically. Keep your sentences clear and avoid unnecessary words.

예시: I usually eat chocolate twice a day. I buy it monthly during my grocery shopping, so I always have some at home to enjoy regularly.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and could be more coherent. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas smoothly. Provide specific details to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolates when I was a kid. I remember during festivals, my dad would bring a box full of chocolates with different flavors. I enjoyed eating them both in the morning and at night.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and does not address the question. Provide a clear opinion with reasons explaining why chocolate is popular globally. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and can be enjoyed in many forms. Additionally, it is often associated with celebrations and happiness, which makes it appealing to many people.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Clearly state your favorite chocolate flavor and mention specific brands if relevant. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

예시: My favorite flavor is milk chocolate. I especially like brands like Lindor, Mars, and Hershey's because they have a smooth and creamy taste.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it is often associated with celebrations and happiness. People usually give chocolates on occasions like Valentine's Day, birthdays, Mother's Day, and Father's Day to show their love.

× Yes, I really like to eat chocolates A becauses chocolates are sweet and tasty.

✓ Yes, I really like to eat chocolates because chocolates are sweet and tasty.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of the conjunction 'because'. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Are you you like milk chocolates?

✓ Do you like milk chocolates?

The phrase 'Are you you like' is incorrect. The correct question form is 'Do you like' when asking about preferences.

× Not the dark chocolate one, but most of the time I don't like sweet things, but if it comes to chocolate I really like it.

✓ Not the dark chocolate ones, but most of the time I don't like sweet things; however, when it comes to chocolate, I really like it.

The phrase 'dark chocolate one' should be plural 'ones' to match 'milk chocolates'. Also, the sentence structure benefits from clearer conjunctions and punctuation for better flow.

× If I haven't I will later regularly, but I just bought for.

✓ If I haven't, I will eat it later regularly, but I just bought some.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding the verb 'eat' clarifies the action, and 'some' is needed after 'bought' to indicate quantity.

× Monthly in my monthly groceries so I usually have free can say.

✓ I buy it monthly in my groceries, so I usually have some to eat.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition use and unclear phrasing. 'In my monthly groceries' is better expressed as 'in my groceries monthly'. 'Free can say' is unclear and replaced with 'some to eat' for clarity.

× Do I said I can eat twice every day?

✓ Did I say I can eat it twice every day?

The sentence structure is incorrect. The correct past tense question form is 'Did I say', and 'it' clarifies the object being eaten.

× Yes, I often eat chocolates when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I often ate chocolates when I was a kid.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the past time reference 'when I was a kid'.

× I remember when we have a eat festival, my dad bring a box full of chocolates.

✓ I remember when we had an eating festival, my dad brought a box full of chocolates.

The verbs 'have' and 'bring' should be in past tense 'had' and 'brought' to match the past context. Also, 'a eat festival' should be 'an eating festival' for correct article and noun form.

× So I really like them having in the morning, in the night as well.

✓ So I really like having them in the morning and at night as well.

The phrase 'like them having' is incorrect; it should be 'like having them'. Also, 'in the night' is better expressed as 'at night'.

× Shock.

✓ Chocolate.

The word 'Shock' is likely a typo or incomplete. The correct word in context is 'Chocolate'.

× Hawaii mostly like milk chocolates his in lot.

✓ I mostly like milk chocolates a lot.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. 'Hawaii' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'I'. 'His in lot' is incorrect and replaced with 'a lot'.

× But uh, more often when it comes to bronze, I like Lindor highlights Nacre, I like Mars, so these are my favorite brands for the chocolates.

✓ But, more often when it comes to brands, I like Lindor, Milka, and Mars; these are my favorite chocolate brands.

'Bronze' is likely a mishearing of 'brands'. 'Highlights Nacre' is unclear and replaced with 'Milka', a known chocolate brand. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Chocolates are always being a part in celebrations and happiness and gives like Valentine days, birthdays, Mother days, Father days.

✓ Chocolates are always a part of celebrations and happiness and gifts like Valentine's Day, birthdays, Mother's Day, and Father's Day.

The phrase 'being a part in' should be 'a part of'. 'Gives like' is incorrect and replaced with 'gifts like'. The holidays are corrected to their proper names with possessive forms and singular 'Day'.

× So I guess it's it's a good thing to give a chocolates to to your loved ones an.

✓ So I guess it's a good thing to give chocolates to your loved ones.

The sentence has repeated words 'it's it's' and 'to to', and an unnecessary 'a' before 'chocolates'. These are removed for correct sentence structure.