Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Örneğin, deneyiminizi açık ve net bir şekilde ifade edin ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

예시: No, I don't like eating chocolate because once I drank hot chocolate and it made me feel sick. Since then, I have avoided chocolate.

제안: Cümleniz kısa ve biraz kopuk. Daha akıcı ve doğal cevaplar vermek için cümleleri birleştirin ve bağlaçlar kullanın.

예시: I don't eat chocolate very often, but sometimes when I am working at my coffee shop, I spontaneously eat some bitter chocolate.

제안: Cümleleriniz kısa ve parçalı. Daha doğal ve etkili cevaplar için cümleleri birleştirip detay verin.

예시: No, I didn't eat chocolate often as a kid because I usually preferred salty foods. Even now, I don't eat much chocolate.

제안: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve tekrarlar var. Daha net ve açıklayıcı olun, ayrıca bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think chocolate is popular because it can release dopamine, which makes people feel happy.

제안: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi hataları ve kopukluklar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cevaplar için cümleleri düzgün kurun ve bağlaçlar kullanın.

예시: As I mentioned, I don't eat chocolate often, but if I do, I prefer bitter chocolate.

제안: Cümleleriniz parçalı ve anlamı tam ifade etmiyor. Daha açık ve akıcı cevaplar için cümleleri birleştirin ve detay verin.

예시: I don't think chocolate is a common gift in my country, except maybe at weddings. Generally, people don't give chocolate as presents here.

× No, I don't because one day I had a I. 8A hot chocolate and I feel sick.

✓ No, I don't because one day I had a hot chocolate and I felt sick.

The verb 'feel' should be in the past tense 'felt' to match the past event 'had a hot chocolate'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× Then I had a trauma. I drink because of that.

✓ Then I had trauma. I don't drink because of that.

The sentence 'I drink because of that' is incorrect in present tense and meaning. It should be 'I don't drink because of that' to express avoidance. Also, 'a trauma' is incorrect; 'trauma' is uncountable here. This is a present tense issue (ID 6).

× Not much. When I am working at my coffee shop, I. Spontaneously eat bitter chocolate.

✓ Not much. When I am working at my coffee shop, I spontaneously eat bitter chocolate.

The period after 'I' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. The verb 'eat' is correct in present tense here. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26) but mainly a punctuation error affecting tense flow.

× No I didn't. I usually prefer salty things like. Food. I don't eat chocolate now.

✓ No, I didn't. I usually preferred salty things like food. I don't eat chocolate now.

The phrase 'I usually prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past time frame 'when you were a kid'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× I don't know, maybe it's because of hormones. It's it's. Dopamine hormone.

✓ I don't know, maybe it's because of hormones. It's the dopamine hormone.

The phrase 'It's it's. Dopamine hormone.' is incorrect. It should be 'It's the dopamine hormone.' to use the definite article correctly. This is an article error (ID 22) and incorrect pronoun use (ID 12).

× As I said, I don't eat chocolate much, but if I. Gonna eat it I prefer. Bitter chocolate.

✓ As I said, I don't eat chocolate much, but if I am going to eat it, I prefer bitter chocolate.

The phrase 'if I. Gonna eat it' is incorrect. It should be 'if I am going to eat it' to correctly use future tense with modal verb. This is a future tense issue (ID 7) and modal verb usage (ID 4).

× No, I don't think so. It's. Good to use chocolate as a gift in maybe weddings or something.

✓ No, I don't think so. It's good to use chocolate as a gift at maybe weddings or something.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to use with events like weddings. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Yeah, in my country. There is no gift. Like as a chocolate.

✓ Yeah, in my country, there is no gift like chocolate.

The phrase 'gift like as a chocolate' is incorrect. It should be 'gift like chocolate' without 'as a'. This is incorrect use of pronouns and articles (ID 12 and 22).