Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e clear and direct topic sentence use korun. English grammar ar sentence structure improve korte hobe, jate answer ta natural lage. Redundancy komate hobe ar sentence gulo shothik vabe complete korte hobe.

예시: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I find it too sweet. Instead, I prefer vanilla flavor as it suits my taste better.

제안: Answer ta clear korte hobe, ar sentence gulo shothik vabe structure korte hobe. Linking words use kore answer ta coherent korte paren. Unnecessary words ba phrases avoid korun.

예시: I usually don't eat chocolate, but I eat it occasionally during special occasions like birthdays when there is chocolate cake.

제안: Sentence gulo complete korte hobe ar grammar shothik korte hobe. Clear topic sentence diye answer start korun, tarpor supporting details den. Redundancy ar incomplete sentence avoid korun.

예시: No, I did not often eat chocolate as a kid because I did not like its taste. I preferred vanilla flavor instead, especially on my birthdays.

제안: Answer e grammar ar vocabulary improve korte hobe. Linking words use kore answer ta logical banan. Specific reasons ar examples dile answer bhalo hobe.

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because many people enjoy its sweet taste. However, some people, like me, prefer other flavors based on personal choice.

제안: Answer ta clear ar concise korte hobe. Grammar ar vocabulary improve korun. Supporting details diye answer ta bhalo banan, ar sentence gulo complete korun.

예시: My favorite chocolate flavors are strawberry and vanilla because they have a tangy taste that is not too sweet or strong.

제안: Answer ta shothik sentence structure e bolun. Linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy. Specific examples diye answer ta bhalo korun.

예시: Yes, chocolate is a good gift, especially on special occasions like birthdays or festivals. However, it may not be suitable to give chocolate all the time.

× No, I don't actually very like chocolate eating chocolate becaused I find it very sweet and the taste is not according to my.

✓ No, I don't actually like eating chocolate very much because I find it very sweet and the taste is not to my liking.

The phrase 'very like chocolate eating chocolate' is incorrect. The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'eating' to express preference. Also, 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. The phrase 'not according to my' is incomplete and should be 'not to my liking' to express personal taste.

× No, I don't actually very like chocolate eating chocolate becaused I find it very sweet and the taste is not according to my.

✓ No, I don't actually like eating chocolate very much because I find it very sweet and the taste is not to my liking.

The phrase 'not according to my' incorrectly uses the pronoun 'my' without a noun. It should be 'not to my liking' to correctly express personal preference.

× If my taste bad and I really like to vanilla rather than chocolate and.

✓ If my taste is bad, I really like vanilla rather than chocolate.

The sentence is incomplete and has plural/singular issues. 'Taste' is singular and needs the verb 'is'. Also, 'like to vanilla' is incorrect; it should be 'like vanilla'. The conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary.

× But whenever there is a someone's birthday and have to try a chocolate cake, that time I eat chocolate rather than I eat most of the time.

✓ But whenever it is someone's birthday and I have to try a chocolate cake, I eat chocolate at that time rather than most of the time.

The phrase 'there is a someone's birthday' is incorrect; 'it is someone's birthday' is correct. Also, 'have to try' needs the subject 'I'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Very last robbery.

✓ This sentence is unclear and seems unrelated; it should be removed or clarified.

'Very last robbery' is a fragment and does not form a complete or meaningful sentence.

× No, when I was a kid I remember I don't like chocolate very much that time becausde chocolate is a thing that doesn't go with my test and I prefer vanilla rather than a chocolate flavored.

✓ No, when I was a kid I remember I didn't like chocolate very much because chocolate is something that doesn't suit my taste and I preferred vanilla rather than chocolate flavor.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Don't like' should be 'didn't like' to match past time. 'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Doesn't go with my test' should be 'doesn't suit my taste'. 'Prefer' should be 'preferred' to maintain past tense consistency.

× For example, on my birthday I always or.

✓ For example, on my birthday I always... (sentence incomplete, needs completion).

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'or'. It needs to be completed to convey meaning.

× I think it's depend on person test both.

✓ I think it depends on a person's taste.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' for third person singular. 'Person test' should be 'person's taste'. The modal verb 'think' is followed by a clause with correct verb form.

× Some people really like eating chocolate, but there are also some people who doesn't like chocolate very much like me and it depends on person choice.

✓ Some people really like eating chocolate, but there are also some people who don't like chocolate very much like me, and it depends on personal choice.

'Who doesn't like' should be 'who don't like' to agree with plural 'people'. 'Person choice' should be 'personal choice'.

× But most other people like Chuck.

✓ But most other people like chocolate.

'Chuck' is likely a typo for 'chocolate'. The sentence is corrected for clarity.

× My favorite flavor in chocolate I think it's strawberry and vanilla becauses that has a sum of of tangy flavor on it, not too sweet and not to.

✓ My favorite flavors of chocolate, I think, are strawberry and vanilla because they have a sum of tangy flavor, not too sweet and not too bold.

'Becauses' is misspelled; should be 'because'. 'Sum of of' is incorrect; should be 'some'. 'Not to' should be 'not too'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct adjective use.

× Bold taste and I really like the flu.

✓ They have a bold taste, and I really like the flavor.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Flu' is likely a typo for 'flavor'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and completeness.

× But it depends the occasion.

✓ But it depends on the occasion.

'Depends' requires the preposition 'on' to indicate the condition.

× If there was a special day you can give someone chocolate, but not always like waiting you don't give a chocolate in a.

✓ If there is a special day, you can give someone chocolate, but not always; for example, you don't give chocolate without a reason.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Was' is changed to 'is' to match the conditional present. The phrase 'like waiting you don't give a chocolate in a' is unclear and rephrased for clarity.