Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和发音错误较多，建议练习简洁明了的句子结构，避免重复和语音错误。可以多用简单句表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: I don't like eating chocolate because it is too sweet for me. For example, chocolate bars usually contain a lot of sugar, which I try to avoid.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达频率时出现混乱，建议学习如何准确表达时间频率，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: I rarely eat chocolate, maybe once every two or three years because I find it too sweet.

제안: 回答内容不明确，语法和词汇错误较多，建议练习用简单句表达过去的习惯，并用具体例子说明。

예시: When I was a kid, I didn't often eat chocolate because I didn't like sweet food. For example, my mother sometimes gave me chocolate, but I usually refused.

제안: 回答逻辑不清，表达混乱，建议学习如何用连贯的句子表达原因，并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: I think chocolate is popular because it gives people energy and helps them relax. For example, my friends often eat chocolate when they feel tired.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，建议直接回答问题并用简单句说明原因。

예시: I don't have a favourite flavour of chocolate because I don't like chocolate.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和词汇使用不准确，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: I think chocolate is a good gift because many people enjoy eating it. For example, my friends and family like receiving chocolate as presents.

× I don't like I I don't eat chocolate very much becauses I think Chuck Lee very sweet.

✓ I don't like chocolate very much because I think chocolate is very sweet.

这里“Chuck Lee”应为“chocolate”，且“chocolate”作为不可数名词，不用复数形式。句中多余的“I”应删除。

× I don't like I I don't eat chocolate very much becauses I think Chuck Lee very sweet.

✓ I don't like chocolate very much because I think chocolate is very sweet.

“very sweet”前应加系动词“is”，表示状态。

× For example, the chappie has a lot of St.

✓ For example, the chocolate has a lot of sugar.

“St”应为“sugar”，且“a lot of”后应接不可数名词“sugar”。

× So I can, it's my uh, but uh, for friend knees.

✓ So I can't, it's my uh, but uh, for friends.

“can”应为“can't”表示否定；“friend knees”应为“friends”，复数形式。

× I don't see all ready to eat chocolate.

✓ I don't feel ready to eat chocolate.

“see all ready”应为“feel ready”，表达“准备好”的意思。

× About one year, 2 years, three years.

✓ About one year, two years, three years.

数字应统一书写格式，且“2”应写为“two”。

× Be 'cause I think chocolate is is very sweet so I don't feel ready to eat.

✓ Because I think chocolate is very sweet so I don't feel ready to eat it.

句尾缺少宾语“it”，指代“chocolate”。

× I don't see you really to eat chocolate in my check out because I don't like CC food.

✓ I didn't really eat chocolate in my childhood because I don't like sweet food.

“see you really to eat”应为“didn't really eat”；“check out”应为“childhood”；“CC food”应为“sweet food”。

× I don't see you really to eat chocolate in my check out because I don't like CC food.

✓ I didn't really eat chocolate in my childhood because I didn't like sweet food.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时态。

× For example, my mother where we like to eat, can't give me can give me it, but I do.

✓ For example, my mother, where we like to eat, can't give me chocolate, but I do.

句子结构混乱，需明确表达“妈妈不能给我巧克力，但我还是吃”。

× For example, my mother where we like to eat, can't give me can give me it, but I do.

✓ For example, my mother, where we like to eat, can't give me chocolate, but I still eat it.

“but I do”不完整，应为“but I still eat it”表示转折。

× I think people ought to eat chocolate can high energy and relax.

✓ I think people ought to eat chocolate because it can give high energy and help them relax.

“ought to”后应接动词原形，且句子缺少连接词“because”使句意完整。

× For example, my my friends each ugly she think it shockley can making hyper hype things an yes.

✓ For example, my friend thinks chocolate can make people hyperactive.

句子中“each ugly she”无意义，应改为“my friend”；“shockley”应为“chocolate”；“can making”应为“can make”；“hyper hype things an yes”应简化为“hyperactive”。

× Sorry teacher, I don't like it. He eats a chap please.

✓ Sorry teacher, I don't like it. He eats a chocolate, please.

“chap please”应为“chocolate please”，且句子表达不清，应调整。

× So I don't like Ari. One of favor of Chucky.

✓ So I don't like any. One of my favorite chocolates.

“Ari”应为“any”，“Chucky”应为“chocolate”；句子需完整表达“我不喜欢任何一种巧克力”。

× I think it is a very good The Geysers because a lot of people like eating chocolates, for example, my friends, teacher, family where we like to eat.

✓ I think it is a very good gift because a lot of people like eating chocolates, for example, my friends, teachers, and family members.

“The Geysers”应为“gift”；“teacher”应为复数“teachers”；“family where we like to eat”表达不清，应为“family members”。

× I think it is a very good The Geysers because a lot of people like eating chocolates, for example, my friends, teacher, family where we like to eat.

✓ I think it is a very good gift because a lot of people like eating chocolates, for example, my friends, teachers, and family members.

“teacher”应为复数形式“teachers”，“family”应具体指“family members”。