Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
수험생
Actually, I don't like eating chocolates because I I don't enjoy the sweet food. Actually I prefer the spicy food, it taste more delicious.
시험관
How often do you eat chocolate?
수험생
I don't eat chocolate very often. I have AIDS about once a month.
시험관
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
수험생
I rarely eat chocolate. When I was a kid, my family didn't buy age very often because it was considered rated a treat.
시험관
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
수험생
I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes very sweet and delicious, which attracts many people, especially children.
시험관
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
수험생
Uhm, maybe I prefer the oringinal. Origin flavor. Sorry, I don't eat it very often.
시험관
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
수험생
Oh yes, I think it's good to use the chocolates as gifts to others because many people love love each chocolates. It's a good choice.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议避免重复表达，注意语法和时态的正确使用。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并适当扩展理由。
예시: I don't like eating chocolate because I don't enjoy sweet foods. Instead, I prefer spicy flavors as they taste more delicious to me.
How often do you eat chocolate?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中出现了明显的错误词汇（AIDS），应注意发音和词汇的准确性。建议使用正确的词汇表达频率，并简洁明了。
예시: I don't eat chocolate very often; maybe about once a month.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中时态使用不当，且有词汇错误（age, rated）。建议使用过去时描述过去的习惯，并注意词汇的准确性。
예시: I rarely ate chocolate when I was a kid because my family considered it a special treat and didn't buy it often.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。
예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and delicious, which attracts many people, especially children. Moreover, it is often used in celebrations and gifts, making it even more popular.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有发音和表达不清的问题，建议直接明确表达喜好，并避免重复。
예시: My favourite flavour of chocolate is the original milk chocolate, although I don't eat it very often.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在重复和语法错误。建议简洁表达并注意语法正确。
예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people love it. It's a popular and thoughtful choice.
문법
× Actually, I don't like eating chocolates because I I don't enjoy the sweet food.
✓ Actually, I don't like eating chocolate because I don't enjoy sweet food.
这里'chocolates'应为不可数名词'chocolate'，表示巧克力这种食物；'the sweet food'中'the'不必要且'sweet food'通常不加冠词。
× Actually I prefer the spicy food, it taste more delicious.
✓ Actually, I prefer spicy food; it tastes more delicious.
主语'it'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，即'tastes'。
× I don't eat chocolate very often. I have AIDS about once a month.
✓ I don't eat chocolate very often. I have it about once a month.
'AIDS'是疾病名词，显然是拼写错误，应为'it'指代巧克力。
× I rarely eat chocolate. When I was a kid, my family didn't buy age very often because it was considered rated a treat.
✓ I rarely ate chocolate. When I was a kid, my family didn't buy it very often because it was considered a treat.
描述过去习惯应使用过去时态'ate'；'age'应为'it'指代巧克力；'considered rated a treat'中'rated'多余，应去掉。
× Oh yes, I think it's good to use the chocolates as gifts to others because many people love love each chocolates.
✓ Oh yes, I think it's good to use chocolates as gifts to others because many people love each chocolate.
'chocolates'作为复数名词时，前面不加定冠词'the'；'each chocolates'应为'each chocolate'，'each'后接单数名词。
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