Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response, starting with a topic sentence that states your preference. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, mention which type of chocolate you like and why, and briefly explain your dislike for others.

예시: I like eating chocolate, especially white chocolate because it is sweet and creamy. However, I don't enjoy dark chocolate as much since it tastes bitter to me. Overall, I prefer sweeter types of chocolate.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and difficult to understand. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question. Explain how often you eat chocolate and give a reason, using linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I only eat chocolate occasionally because I think it is not very healthy. However, I enjoy it a lot, so I try to control how much I eat.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question. Then add specific details about the types of chocolate you liked as a child and why. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. I especially liked white chocolate because it was sweet and delicious. Sometimes, I also enjoyed milk chocolate as a treat.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question by explaining reasons why chocolate is popular globally. Use linking words and specific reasons such as taste, mood improvement, or cultural factors.

예시: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and delicious. Also, it can improve people's mood by releasing happy chemicals in the brain. Many cultures enjoy chocolate in different forms, which adds to its popularity.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your favourite flavour. Then add a reason why you like it, avoiding unnecessary repetition. Use simple and correct sentences.

예시: My favourite flavour of chocolate is white chocolate because it is sweet and creamy. I enjoy its smooth texture and mild taste.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to clearly express your opinion about giving chocolate as gifts. Provide reasons and examples, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people enjoy it. For example, people often give chocolate to their partners on special occasions like Valentine's Day.

× Is depend on the type of chocolate.

✓ It depends on the type of chocolate.

The sentence lacks a subject and the verb form is incorrect. 'Is depend' should be 'It depends' to correctly use the third person singular present tense verb form with the subject 'It'.

× Light allies eating white chocolate because this is sweet.

✓ I like eating white chocolate because it is sweet.

'Light allies' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'I like'. 'This' should be 'it' to refer to 'white chocolate'. The sentence needs a proper subject and verb agreement.

× However back traveling is smaller bitter sold.

✓ However, dark chocolate is a bit bitter, so I don't like it.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Back traveling' and 'smaller bitter sold' are incorrect phrases. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

× Dark chocolate that I would prefer to try.

✓ I would prefer to try dark chocolate.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb. The correction forms a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× Do I check like?

✓ Do I sound like that?

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction assumes the intended meaning is to ask if the speaker sounds like that.

× Actually I'm only.

✓ Actually, I only eat it occasionally.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. The correction completes the sentence to express frequency of eating chocolate.

× In some time to eat chocolate.

✓ Sometimes I eat chocolate.

The original phrase is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction uses a proper adverb of frequency and verb.

× Because.

✓ Because I think it is not very healthy.

A single conjunction 'Because' cannot stand alone as a sentence. The correction completes the thought.

× I think check this is not very healthy.

✓ I think chocolate is not very healthy.

'Check' is incorrect here. The correction replaces it with 'chocolate' to make sense.

× And this translator, but I really enjoy office with her so I'll try to control myself.

✓ And although it is a treat, I really enjoy it, so I'll try to control myself.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unrelated words. The correction clarifies the intended meaning about enjoying chocolate but trying to control consumption.

× Not you get it properly.

✓ I don't get it properly.

The original sentence is ungrammatical. The correction uses proper subject and verb.

× Yes, I often eat chocolate when I working as I says alike mutually because in my childhood I usually eat chocolate like white chocolate can.

✓ Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was working, as I said earlier, because in my childhood I usually ate white chocolate.

The original sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. The correction uses past tense verbs to match the past time frame.

× Is a brined course with land chocolate.

✓ It is a kind of brown chocolate.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. The correction interprets the intended meaning and corrects vocabulary.

× I think this is sweetie and delicious.

✓ I think this is sweet and delicious.

'Sweetie' is a noun or term of endearment, not an adjective here. The correction uses the adjective 'sweet'.

× I really.

✓ I really like it.

The original sentence is incomplete. The correction completes the thought.

× So do I have with some report's search which is state that chocolate can?

✓ I have read some reports which state that chocolate can...

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction forms a proper sentence introducing reports about chocolate.

× 'Cause is always sweet fruit and with groups can bring happiness since.

✓ 'Cause it is always sweet and can bring happiness.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning.

× Is going to work in your.

✓ It can help you work better.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction assumes intended meaning about chocolate's effect.

× Some brine fresh and so it can make you feel.

✓ It can refresh you and make you feel good.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought.

× My favorite chocolate is white chocolate because this is really delicious.

✓ My favourite chocolate is white chocolate because it is really delicious.

'This' should be 'it' to refer to 'white chocolate' properly.

× Yes, as I mentioned is.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before.

The original sentence is incomplete. The correction completes the phrase.

× Much time?

✓ Many times.

'Much time' is incorrect here; 'many times' is the correct quantifier for countable occurrences.

× Is this really, really yummy?

✓ It is really, really yummy.

The original sentence is a question but context suggests a statement is intended.

× This looks like something like new chocolate.

✓ This looks like a new kind of chocolate.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning.

× Or white chocolate and is.

✓ Or white chocolate, and it is delicious.

The original sentence is incomplete. The correction completes the thought.

× Yes, sure.

✓ Yes, sure.

This sentence is acceptable as a short affirmative response.

× For myself, I was so happy it.

✓ For myself, I am so happy with it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction uses present tense and proper preposition.

× If there's anyone to give.

✓ If there is anyone to give it to.

The original sentence is incomplete. The correction completes the thought with proper preposition.

× Me chuckling ever give power over I feel like.

✓ When someone gives me chocolate, I feel happy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction interprets the intended meaning and corrects grammar.

× There's a fun days of people will give their partner or people to light a chocolate because this is really this might be useful as Anne.

✓ There are fun days when people give chocolate to their partners or friends because it is really useful as a gift.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect words. The correction clarifies the meaning with proper grammar and vocabulary.