Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然的句子结构回答，并注意时态和主谓一致。回答应直接给出观点（Yes/No或程度），然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持。同时避免冗长或重复。可以用连接词如“because”或“if”使句子更连贯。

예시: I’m fairly good at memorising things when I’m interested in the topic, because interest helps me focus. If the subject bores me, I find it much harder to remember details.

제안: 答案应更真实并更精确地描述情况。不要用绝对否定（No）如果有例外，改用简短的主题句然后给出具体方法或例子来支持（例如如何防止遗忘）。注意句子语法和代词用法（write them down on my phone / on paper）。

예시: I try not to forget important things by writing reminders on my phone and on small notes. For instance, before exams I set alarms and keep a checklist to make sure I don’t miss anything.

제안: 回答结构较好，但可以更简洁并加入具体细节或例子以显得自然。用连接词（for example, such as, and）使信息更有条理。避免重复“need to”。

예시: As a student, I need to remember schedules such as exam dates, my study tasks, and my sleep times. For example, I keep a weekly planner to note test dates and revise specific subjects each evening.

제안: 回答直接且清晰，但可通过补充方法细节来提高分数，例如说明如何组织这些笔记（提醒、日历、优先级），并使用连接词使句子更自然。注意短语用法（sticky notes / on my phone）。

예시: I usually write important things on sticky notes or set reminders on my phone. I also prioritise tasks in a digital calendar and check it every morning so nothing is missed.

× Sometimes if I feel interesting in this, I will memorizing.

✓ Sometimes if I find this interesting, I will memorize it.

原句中“feel interesting in”用法不正确，應使用“find something interesting”來表達“覺得⋯有趣”。另外“memorizing”在此句中與助動詞“will”並列，應用動詞原形“memorize”。建議用法：換成“find this interesting”來表達感覺，用“memorize”作為將來時的主要動詞。

× If I didn't very interested in I won't memorize.

✓ If I am not very interested in it, I won't memorize it.

原句代詞使用和時態混亂。首先應用代詞“it”來指代前文的事物；其次條件句應使用現在時表示一般真理或習慣（If I am not...），而非過去時“didn't”。另外主句中也需要加上賓語“it”。建議使用“If I am not very interested in it, I won't memorize it.”。

× No, I always memorize all the important things in my head such as test competition or something else and I usually write down them on my or paste paper.

✓ No, I always keep all the important things in my head, such as test dates or competitions, and I usually write them down on my phone or on paper.

原句中時態和詞語選擇混亂。“memorize”可改為“keep in my head”或“remember”；“test competition”詞不當，應拆分為“test dates or competitions”。代詞“them”位置錯誤，應放在動詞之後且與“write down”搭配："write them down"。另外“on my or paste paper”不通，應為“on my phone or on paper”。建議整理為現在時的習慣性表述。

× and I usually write down them on my or paste paper.

✓ and I usually write them down on my phone or on paper.

原句中介詞使用錯誤。“write down”需要賓語在後（write them down），而“on my or paste paper”中的“on”應分別搭配“phone”與“paper”。“paste paper”不是常用表達，應為“paper”。建議使用“on my phone or on paper”。

× I am a student so I need to remember when I need to take a test, what I need to study and when I need to wake up and sleep.

✓ I am a student, so I need to remember when I need to take tests, what I need to study, and when I need to wake up and go to sleep.

原句重複使用“need to”雖可理解但略顯冗長，且“take a test”應視為習慣性行為可用複數“tests”。“wake up and sleep”語義不自然，應為“wake up and go to sleep”。時態保持現在時描述習慣。建議微調詞序和用詞使句子更自然流暢。

× I usually write them down on a paste paper or write down on my phone.

✓ I usually write them down on paper or on my phone.

“a paste paper”不是正確說法。應使用“on paper”來表示“在紙上”，並且“write them down”一次就足夠，不需重複“write down”。另外介詞“on”應與“paper”和“phone”各自搭配。建議簡化為“write them down on paper or on my phone”。