Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、文法の誤りと冗長さが目立ちます。まず冒頭で直接質問に答える簡潔なトピック文（例：No, I'm not very good at memorising things.）を述べ、その後理由を1〜2文で具体的に補足してください。接続詞（because, but, however）を正しく使い、時制と主語一致（"shouldn't I was" のような誤りを避ける）を直しましょう。語彙は適切ですが、文を短くし自然な流れを意識してください。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I’m fine with subjects like maths and physics because they rely on understanding concepts, but I struggle with social studies since it requires remembering many names and dates.

제안: 回答は明確で内容も具体的ですが、いくつかの表現上の問題（"remember to memo", 不要な繰り返し、文の切れ）があります。まず短い肯定から始め、次に具体例を2つまでに絞り、接続詞（for example, such as, and）でつなぎましょう。また自然なフレーズ（"use a calendar app"）を使うと良いです。

예시: No, I haven't. I use a calendar app to save important dates, such as my friends' birthdays and work meetings, which helps me avoid missing any events.

제안: 回答は意味が取りにくく、文の断片や単語の誤用（"Apple tasks"？）が多いです。まず具体的に何を覚える必要があるかを一文で述べ（e.g. daily tasks and deadlines）、次に一つか二つの例を挙げて詳しく説明してください。短く完結した文で、動詞や名詞の形を正しく使うこと（remember tasks, complete tasks by the deadline）を心がけてください。

예시: I need to remember my daily tasks and deadlines. For example, I keep a to-do list for work assignments and personal errands so I don't miss any important due dates.

제안: 回答は不自然で文法的に正しくない箇所が多く、意味が不明瞭です。まず方法を明確なトピック文で答え（e.g. I use digital tools and reminders）、続けて具体的な手段を2つ示してください。時間表現（daily/weekly reminders）やツール名（calendar app, alarms）を正しく使い、接続詞で論理的につなげましょう。

예시: I use a calendar app and set daily or weekly reminders for important events. I also add alarms for specific deadlines so I don't forget important dates.

× Well, no I'm not, but I want to ask, shouldn't I was pretty good at mathematics or physics but.

✓ Well, no I'm not. I used to be pretty good at mathematics and physics, though.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect conjunction and tense. The original mixes a question tag 'shouldn't' with past tense 'was', which is ungrammatical. Use a clear contrastive conjunction 'though' or 'but' and the correct past habitual form 'used to be' to express previous ability. Keep sentences short and separate ideas with a period to improve clarity.

× I am not good at society because it has a lot of things to remember like historical people or buildings was really hard to remember.

✓ I am not good at social studies because there are many things to remember, like historical figures and buildings, which are really hard to remember.

The phrase 'good at society' is incorrect; use 'good at social studies' or 'history'. 'It has a lot of things to remember' should be 'there are many things to remember' (existence structure). 'Historical people' is better as 'historical figures'. Also change the clause 'was really hard to remember' to 'which are really hard to remember' to match plural subject and correct relative clause structure.

× All of them.

✓ All of them are difficult to remember.

This fragment lacks a verb and is a sentence structure error. Complete the thought by adding a verb and object: 'are difficult to remember' to make it a full sentence.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten anything important.

The short answer 'No, I haven't.' is grammatically acceptable but ambiguous. To clearly answer the question 'Have you ever forgotten something important?' use the present perfect with a clear complement: 'I haven't forgotten anything important.' This keeps tense consistent and explicit.

× I always try to remember to memo in my calendar apps.

✓ I always try to make a note in my calendar apps.

The verb 'memo' is not commonly used transitively in this context. Use 'make a note' or 'write a memo' and the preposition 'in' is fine. 'Make a note in my calendar apps' is idiomatic.

× For example my birthday and my friend's birthday or the big event I want to join or.

✓ For example, I note my birthday, my friends' birthdays, and big events I want to attend.

The original is a fragmented list ending with 'or.' Fix by forming a parallel list with proper commas and use 'attend' instead of 'join' for events. Also use plural possessive 'friends' birthdays' if multiple, or 'friend's' if singular.

× The day I need to go to the office, it is very effective to remember important events or days.

✓ Also, noting the day I need to go to the office helps me remember important events and dates.

The original used awkward word order and 'it is very effective to remember' which is unnatural. Use a clearer structure: subject + verb ('noting ... helps me'). Use 'dates' instead of repeating 'days'.

× I need to remember everything tasks.

✓ I need to remember all my tasks.

'Everything tasks' is ungrammatical. Use 'all my tasks' or 'everything' alone. 'All my tasks' correctly quantifies the noun 'tasks'.

× When I walk, I can't. Schedule my daily. Tasks.

✓ When I walk, I can't schedule my daily tasks.

The original is broken into fragments and misplaces the period. Combine into a single sentence: 'I can't schedule my daily tasks' and keep 'when I walk' as a time clause. Ensure the verb 'schedule' directly follows the auxiliary.

× So it is important to not forget complete Apple tasks for the deadline.

✓ So it is important not to forget to complete tasks before the deadline.

The phrase 'forget complete Apple tasks' is confusing and likely a misordering/word choice issue. Use the infinitive 'to complete' after 'forget' and 'before the deadline' is the correct prepositional phrase. Remove 'Apple' unless referring to Apple-specific tasks; if so, clarify as 'Apple tasks'.

× To avoid forgetting the important events, which is very effective because there is a manufacturer a day and a week.

✓ To avoid forgetting important events, I use reminders, which is very effective because I can set them for a day or a week in advance.

The original sentence uses 'which' unclearly and contains 'manufacturer' which is likely a wrong word. Replace with 'reminders' and clarify the ability to set reminders 'for a day or a week in advance.' Ensure relative clause 'which is very effective' correctly refers to using reminders.

× And I can go to anything I want, anything important, dates.

✓ This way I can remember any important dates or events I care about.

The original has fragmented structure and pronoun/word choice issues ('go to anything I want'). Replace with a clear statement: 'I can remember any important dates or events I care about.' Use 'any' and plural 'dates' or 'events' to match context.