Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific example to support your claim. Avoid extra qualifiers like 'I think' that weaken confidence. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I have a good memory. For example, I can easily remember facts and tips I find interesting, such as language rules or recipe steps, because I relate them to real situations.

제안: Answer more directly and give a brief specific instance or strategy to make it convincing. Use a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') but ensure the sentence is complete and clear.

예시: Not often — I rarely forget important things because I use reminders on my phone and write notes in a planner when I have appointments or deadlines.

제안: Be specific about categories of things you need to remember and avoid vague phrases like 'happy memory'. Provide 2–3 concrete examples and use linking words to organise them.

예시: In daily life I need to remember practical things such as work tasks, passwords, and grocery lists; I also like to remember special moments with friends so I can revisit them later.

제안: This is a clear answer; improve by giving one specific example of a visual or imaginative technique and a brief result to illustrate effectiveness.

예시: I use visualisation: for example, I picture a colourful post-it on the door to remember a task, and this method helps me recall it reliably later.

× Yes, I think I have a quite good memory, especially when it comes to interesting and useful information.

✓ Yes, I think I have quite a good memory, especially when it comes to interesting and useful information.

Remove the unnecessary article 'a' before the adverb phrase 'quite good'. 'Quite' modifies the adjective 'good' and does not require 'a' when used with uncountable noun 'memory' in this adjective complement. Suggestion: say 'quite a good memory' only if emphasizing a single countable instance, but with 'memory' as an ability, 'quite good memory' is natural.

× Honestly, not very often, and because I try to remember important things carefully.

✓ Honestly, not very often, because I try to remember important things carefully.

The original has a fragment joined incorrectly with 'and because', producing an incomplete structure. Remove the conjunction 'and' to make a single coherent sentence: 'not very often, because...'. Alternatively, start a new sentence: 'Honestly, not very often. I try to remember important things carefully.' This fixes the sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× I mainly need to remember useful knowledge and important information and happy memory from my life.

✓ I mainly need to remember useful knowledge, important information, and happy memories from my life.

The phrase 'happy memory' should be plural ('happy memories') to match the general idea of multiple recollections from life. Also improve parallelism by using commas and making the list consistent: 'useful knowledge, important information, and happy memories.' This corrects number agreement and sentence flow.

× I usually use my imagination and visual memory to remember important things more easily.

✓ I usually use my imagination and visual memory to remember important things more easily.

No correction needed. The sentence correctly uses infinitive 'to remember' after 'use' and 'visual memory' is acceptable. Explanation: structure is correct; keep as is.