Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity and grammar, reduce hesitations, and give a concise structure: state directly whether you are good at memorising, then explain one or two reliable methods with linking words. Avoid filler sounds and correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'record' not 'recorded' if habitual; 'remind' instead of unclear 'wound').

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising. Therefore, I usually record important information in a notebook or on my phone because that helps me remember deadlines and appointments. For example, I use calendar alerts to remind me about meetings.

제안: Give a clear, concise story with correct tense and fewer repetitions. Begin with a direct statement, then briefly describe what happened, why it happened, and the result or how you fixed it. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeated words.

예시: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment last week. I had arranged to meet a friend at a restaurant, but I mixed up the date and missed the reservation. As a result, I apologised and we rescheduled for the following day.

제안: Be specific about routines and use clear linking words. State the main point, then give two or three specific daily tasks with simple explanations and consistent tense. Replace vague phrases ('do quick what else') with concrete activities.

예시: I need to remember daily healthy routines. For example, every morning I drink at least two glasses of water and do a short 15-minute stretching routine to boost my energy. In the afternoons I usually go for a 30-minute jog to stay fit.

제안: Use correct grammar and give a short explanation of why the method works, plus one example. Start with a direct topic sentence, then justify with linking words (because, so) and give a specific example of how you use the method.

예시: I remember important things by using my phone's to-do list app. I find it effective because I can set deadlines and reminders, so I never miss appointments. For instance, I add grocery items and set a notification for the day I plan to shop.

× Well, actually I'm not. That's why I usually, uh, recorded some important things in my notebook or in my phone list because this can help me to, uh, umm, wound these things and to do this.

✓ Well, actually I'm not. That's why I usually record important things in my notebook or in my phone list, because this helps me to remember them and to do them.

Multiple errors: 'recorded' is past tense but speaker describes a habitual action, so simple present 'record' is correct (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'this can help me to, uh, umm, wound these things' contains a wrong verb 'wound' and unclear structure; use 'remember' and a pronoun 'them' for plural objects (Incorrect use of verbs and pronouns — IDs 8/12). Also 'this can help me' should agree with singular demonstrative 'this' so 'helps me' is more natural (Subject-verb agreement / present tense — IDs 6/27). Suggestion: use clear, simple present forms for habits and replace incorrect verbs with 'remember' and use pronouns for previously mentioned items.

× Yes, I have, because I'm really a really easy to forget something I remember quite well.

✓ Yes, I have, because I'm really forgetful and I easily forget things I think I remembered well.

Awkward structure and incorrect word choice: 'I'm really a really easy to forget something' is ungrammatical. Use adjective 'forgetful' (Incorrect use of adjectives — ID 13) and adverb 'easily' to modify 'forget' (Incorrect adverb placement — ID 20). 'something I remember quite well' should be pluralized to 'things I thought I remembered well' if referring generally (Singular/plural issue — ID 1). Also verb tense 'thought I remembered' fits context.

× That was last week. I was a point with my friend to the beautiful restaurant, but I forget it.

✓ That was last week. I made an appointment with my friend to go to a beautiful restaurant, but I forgot it.

'I was a point' is incorrect phrase; use 'made an appointment' or 'arranged to meet' (Sentence structure errors — ID 26). 'to the beautiful restaurant' should be 'to go to a beautiful restaurant' for clarity (Incorrect use of prepositions — ID 11). 'forget' is present tense; the past tense 'forgot' is required referring to last week (Past tense issue — ID 5).

× I'm so sorry for for her, for she.

✓ I'm so sorry for her.

Redundant 'for' and incorrect pronoun case 'she' instead of object form 'her' (Incorrect use of pronouns — ID 12; Sentence structure errors — ID 26). Keep simple object pronoun 'her' and remove repetition.

× Well, I need to remember to maintain healthy routines. For example, I drink more water and do quick what else every morning to boost my energy and concentration.

✓ Well, I need to remember to maintain healthy routines. For example, I drink more water and do quick exercises every morning to boost my energy and concentration.

'do quick what else' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'do quick exercises' (Sentence structure errors — ID 26). Maintain parallel verb forms 'drink' and 'do' in simple present for habitual actions (Present tense issue — ID 6). Use a clear noun 'exercises' instead of vague phrase.

× Umm, maybe in the afternoon I will do some jogging.

✓ Umm, maybe in the afternoon I'll go jogging.

'Do some jogging' is understandable but 'go jogging' is more natural in English; contraction 'I'll' is acceptable for spoken style. Ensure future tense 'will' is used correctly for a planned action (Future tense issue — ID 7).

× Well, there are lots of method to remember important things, but for me the most useful way is to recorded it in the in my phone list.

✓ Well, there are lots of methods to remember important things, but for me the most useful way is to record them in my phone's list.

'lots of method' should be plural 'lots of methods' (Singular and plural issue — ID 1). 'recorded' is past tense; use infinitive or base form 'record' to describe the method (Verb tense issue — ID 6). 'it' should be plural 'them' to refer to 'important things' (Pronoun error — ID 12). 'in the in my phone list' contains extra article and preposition; use 'in my phone's list' or 'in my phone list' (Article/preposition errors — IDs 17/11).

× I think To Do List is the best way to remember things.

✓ I think a to-do list is the best way to remember things.

'To Do List' should be lowercased as 'to-do list' and usually preceded by an article 'a' (Article errors / Incorrect use of capitalization — ID 22 and 17). Use hyphens for the compound noun 'to-do list' and include 'a' for natural English.