Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I can confidently say" and "definitely above average" together. Also, try to use simpler phrases and add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I have a good memory and often practice exercises to keep it sharp, which helps me recall information easily.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on clarity.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes, but I try not to make it a habit by using reminders and notes.

제안: Your answer is well-structured and specific. To improve, correct minor grammar mistakes (e.g., 'a event' should be 'an event') and use linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: I like to stay organized, so whenever I have an event or appointment coming up, I save it in my calendar and set alarms to make sure I don't miss it.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: I remember important things by making a prioritized list based on urgency, which helps me organize my day effectively and stay stress-free.

× Being is that I'm a human, I have absolutely made mistakes such as forgetting something important, however it's nothing.

✓ Being human, I have definitely made mistakes such as forgetting something important; however, it's nothing serious.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and awkward phrasing. 'Being is that I'm a human' is ungrammatical. The correction uses 'Being human' as a participial phrase to introduce the idea, and improves clarity and flow by fixing punctuation and word choice.

× I allow myself to ever do often.

✓ I don't allow myself to do that often.

The phrase 'allow myself to ever do often' is incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by using a negative construction and proper adverb placement to express frequency.

× For example, if there's a event or appointment that I have coming up, I always make sure to save it in my calendar and to set alarms so that there's no chance of missing.

✓ For example, if there's an event or appointment that I have coming up, I always make sure to save it in my calendar and to set alarms so that there's no chance of missing it.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'event'. Also, the sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'missing' to complete the meaning.