Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain briefly why you find memorizing difficult.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget easily. This often makes me feel disorganized, so I try to find ways to help myself remember important information.

제안: Improve your grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain how you prevent forgetting important things.

예시: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I know I tend to forget easily. Therefore, I always keep notes of important things to help me remember them.

제안: Be more specific and use linking words to organize your answer. Avoid vague phrases like 'etcetera' and try to give clear examples. Also, correct grammar mistakes for better clarity.

예시: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as appointments with doctors and deadlines for submitting assignments. These are important to keep my schedule on track.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding linking words and more specific details. For example, explain how using notes helps you stay organized and reduces stress.

예시: I always keep notes on my phone to remember important things because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I feel less stressed since I don't have to worry about forgetting important tasks.

× By keeping it makes me very unorganized.

✓ Keeping it makes me very unorganized.

The phrase 'By keeping it' is incorrect because 'by' should be followed by a gerund verb form without 'it' in this context. The correct form is 'Keeping it' to indicate the action causing the effect.

× No, I never forgotten my important things because I I know I early forget things so I keep notes of every important things is.

✓ No, I have never forgotten my important things because I know I forget things early, so I keep notes of every important thing.

The verb 'forgotten' requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'early forget' is incorrect; it should be 'forget things early'. The phrase 'every important things is' is incorrect; it should be 'every important thing' because 'every' is followed by a singular noun.

× No, I never forgotten my important things because I I know I early forget things so I keep notes of every important things is.

✓ No, I have never forgotten my important things because I know I forget things early, so I keep notes of every important thing.

The repeated pronoun 'I I' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× No, I never forgotten my important things because I I know I early forget things so I keep notes of every important things is.

✓ No, I have never forgotten my important things because I know I forget things early, so I keep notes of every important thing.

'Every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'important things' should be 'important thing'.

× There are so many things which I need to remember in my daily life and for example appointment with doctors and when I submit my assignment etcetera.

✓ There are so many things which I need to remember in my daily life, for example, appointments with doctors and when I submit my assignments, etcetera.

'Appointment' and 'assignment' should be plural to match the context of multiple events. Also, the phrase 'and for example' is awkward; 'for example' should be set off by commas.

× There are so many things which I need to remember in my daily life and for example appointment with doctors and when I submit my assignment etcetera.

✓ There are so many things which I need to remember in my daily life, for example, appointments with doctors and when I submit my assignments, etcetera.

'Appointment' and 'assignment' should be plural to correctly refer to multiple instances.