Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I good at memory things”应为“I am good at memorising things”，且用词不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially numbers like passwords and credit card numbers, which I can remember easily.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地叙述事件，使用正确的时态和连接词。

예시: Last year, I forgot my best friend's birthday. She was a little angry at first, but I apologized and gave her a gift to make up for it.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明需要记住的内容，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I need to remember the medicine schedule for my daughter because she has to take several kinds of medicine, so I must know which medicine to give her and when.

제안: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加细节使内容更丰富。建议补充说明具体方法和原因，使用连接词。

예시: I usually write down important things on my phone and set alarms to remind me, so I don't forget them.

× I good at memory things and especially the numbers and I can memory, uh, numbers easily and such as the password and the credit card numbers and so on.

✓ I am good at memorising things, especially numbers, and I can memorise numbers easily, such as passwords and credit card numbers.

这里的'memory things'应为'memorising things'，因为'memory'是名词，需用动名词形式'memorising'表示记忆的动作；'numbers'是复数，前面要用复数形式；'password'应为复数形式'passwords'以匹配上下文。

× last year I had forgotten my best friend's birthday and uh, and she at first she is a little angry and uh, and I uh, apologized, uh, it for her and uh, umm, brought a, a gift for her and in the air.

✓ Last year I forgot my best friend's birthday, and at first she was a little angry. I apologized to her and brought a gift for her in the end.

这里应使用一般过去时'forgot'而非过去完成时'had forgotten'，因为事件顺序清晰；'she is'应改为过去时'she was'；'apologized it for her'结构错误，应为'apologized to her'；'in the air'表达不清，应改为'in the end'表示最后。

× I uh, apologized, uh, it for her and uh, umm, brought a, a gift for her and in the air.

✓ I apologized to her and brought a gift for her in the end.

动词'apologize'后应接介词'to'表示向某人道歉；'apologized it for her'结构错误；'in the air'用法不当，应改为'in the end'表示最终。

× I need to remember the medicines ways to my daughter and because my daughter had to eat several kinds of medicine, so I need to remember which kind medicine to eat.

✓ I need to remember the ways to give medicines to my daughter because she has to take several kinds of medicine, so I need to remember which kind of medicine to take.

'medicines ways to my daughter'表达不正确，应为'the ways to give medicines to my daughter'；'had to eat'应改为'has to take'，因为服药用'take'；'which kind medicine'应为'which kind of medicine'。

× I usually write down these things on my phone and I always set alarm for it.

✓ I usually write down these things on my phone and I always set an alarm for them.

'set alarm for it'中'alarm'前应加不定冠词'an'，且'it'指代不明确，应改为'them'指代前文的'these things'。