Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms (e.g., 'memorising' instead of 'memorise', 'forget' instead of 'forgot'). Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'to our'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget to bring my wallet when I go out. This happens quite frequently, which can be frustrating.

제안: Use past tense correctly and clarify your ideas. Avoid vague phrases like 'there's something important' and unclear references like 'F eventually is fine'. Use linking words to explain your point clearly.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, but fortunately, she was understanding about it.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Use correct expressions like 'work out' and 'healthy diet' instead of 'heavy diets'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I need to remember to stay healthy by working out in the mornings and drinking enough water. Also, I try to maintain a balanced diet to keep my energy levels up.

제안: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. It seems you meant 'I rely on technology, especially smartphones'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'fans tutor technologies' and 'schedule my daily voting'. Use linking words to explain how technology helps you.

예시: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For example, I use my smartphone to set reminders and keep track of my daily schedule.

× I'm terrible at memorise things.

✓ I'm terrible at memorising things.

The verb 'memorise' should be in the '-ing' form after the preposition 'at'. The correct form is 'memorising'. This is a common pattern where verbs following prepositions take the gerund form.

× I always forgot something that important.

✓ I always forget something that is important.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'that important' should be 'that is important' to be grammatically correct.

× For example, I often forget that I have to bring my wallet to our.

✓ For example, I often forget that I have to bring my wallet when I go out.

The phrase 'to our' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'when I go out' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× I forgot to bring something important before I go to work or out.

✓ I forget to bring something important before I go to work or go out.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is more appropriate than the past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'or out' should be 'or go out' to complete the phrase.

× Yes I do. There's something important.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important.

The response should directly answer the question about forgetting something important. 'Yes, I do' is vague. Using 'I have forgotten' clearly indicates past experience.

× Maybe I forgot that some of my best friend's birthday, but F eventually is fine with that.

✓ Maybe I forgot some of my best friend's birthdays, but they are eventually fine with that.

'Forgot' is correct for past tense. 'That' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Some of my best friend's birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' because 'some' implies more than one. 'F' seems to be a typo and should be 'they'. 'Eventually is fine' should be 'are eventually fine' to agree with plural subject.

× Are we saying I need to remember to stay healthy so I go to work out in the mornings and keep hydrated so and maybe take some heavy diets?

✓ I need to remember to stay healthy by working out in the mornings, keeping hydrated, and maybe following a heavy diet.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Are we saying' is unnecessary. 'Go to work out' should be 'working out'. 'Keep hydrated so and maybe take some heavy diets' is awkward; it should be 'keeping hydrated and maybe following a heavy diet'.

× I would say fans tutor technologies.

✓ I would say I use technology a lot.

'Fans tutor technologies' is unclear and incorrect. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. The intended meaning is likely 'I use technology a lot' or similar.

× I really rely heavily on television that's specially the smartphones help me keep checking and and schedule my daily voting.

✓ I really rely heavily on technology, especially smartphones, which help me keep track and schedule my daily activities.

'Television that's specially the smartphones' is incorrect. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'Keep checking and and schedule my daily voting' is unclear; likely intended 'keep track and schedule my daily activities'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct word usage.