Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: I used to be good at memorizing things when I was a child, but now my memory isn't as sharp. However, I am actively working on improving it.

제안: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use linking words, and avoid redundancy. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will improve clarity.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times, especially during exams. For example, sometimes I know the answer but suddenly forget it, which makes me very upset.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition.

예시: As a student, I need to remember study materials, assignments given by my professors, and any programs or activities organized by my school.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to be concise and clear.

예시: I usually write down important information in my phone or notes. Whenever I need to remember something, I check these notes to help me recall it.

× Or in my childhood I was very good at memorizing thing, but now I've grown up and my memorizing skill is is going to all those day by day.

✓ In my childhood, I was very good at memorizing things, but now I've grown up and my memorizing skills are going down day by day.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context, and 'is is going to all those day by day' is corrected to 'are going down day by day' to express decline properly.

× I'm not a very good memorizing.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing.

The phrase 'a very good memorizing' is incorrect because 'memorizing' is a gerund and cannot be used as a noun with an article here. The correct expression is 'good at memorizing'.

× I don't have a very good memories right now, but I'm trying to improve my skills.

✓ I don't have very good memories right now, but I'm trying to improve my skills.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural noun 'memories'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× The same thing happens with me more than 10 or 1000 times, especially at the exam gender, when I know that I know the completely that I know completely to answer the question, but suddenly I forgot and it makes me so so heartbroken and so emotional that I'll never forget this situation.

✓ The same thing has happened to me more than 10 or 1000 times, especially during exams, when I know completely the answer to the question, but suddenly I forget, and it makes me so heartbroken and emotional that I'll never forget this situation.

The present tense 'happens' should be present perfect 'has happened' to indicate repeated past events. 'At the exam gender' is unclear and corrected to 'during exams'. 'I forgot' is changed to 'I forget' to maintain present tense in the general statement. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I need to remember in my daily lives as a student, most of the time that it started materials, if there's any kinds of any kinds of uh, programs to our national story club or in classes in my or in study, which was, uh, given by the professor as an assignment or other study which was given by the professors.

✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life as a student, most of the time study materials, any kinds of programs in our national story club or classes, which are given by the professor as assignments or other study tasks.

The phrase 'remember in my daily lives' is incorrect; it should be 'remember many things in my daily life'. 'Any kinds of any kinds of' is redundant and corrected to 'any kinds of'. Prepositions like 'to' are replaced with 'in' to correctly indicate location or context. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× These are the main things to him by.

✓ These are the main things to remember.

The phrase 'to him by' is unclear and incorrect. It is replaced with 'to remember' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I remember the important things most of the time I take down the all the important things in my phone and my notes.

✓ I remember important things by writing down all the important things in my phone and notes most of the time.

The phrase 'take down the all the important things' is incorrect; 'writing down all the important things' is more appropriate. Also, 'the important things' is better as 'important things' in this context.

× So whenever I need alright for good, I try, I check my phone and then I can remember that what I need.

✓ So whenever I need to remember something, I check my phone, and then I can recall what I need.

The phrase 'need alright for good' is unclear and incorrect. It is replaced with 'need to remember something' for clarity. The sentence is restructured for better flow and grammatical correctness.