Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm and personal experience, which is good. However, it lacks clarity and contains some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and structured, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I have a strong memory, almost like an elephant's. For example, I can recall events from when I was just one year old. People often find it surprising how much I remember, which shows how effective my memory is.

제안: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I am a very organized person. I always make plans and keep journals, both mentally and in my diary or phone. Additionally, I set alarms for every important task to ensure I don't miss anything.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and clearly, and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: The main thing I need to remember daily is to prepare for my university admission exams in Canada. It is important for me to study hard and achieve a good score to get accepted. Therefore, I focus on this goal every day without fail.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and incomplete thoughts. Try to avoid unnecessary hesitations and finish your sentences clearly. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples of your methods.

예시: I remember important things by making detailed schedules and setting alarms on my phone. Additionally, I ask friends or family to remind me about important tasks if needed, which helps me stay on track.

× I'm really good at memorizing thing because I feel like I have a really an elephant's memory

✓ I'm really good at memorizing things because I feel like I have a really elephant's memory

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items that the student can memorize. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about memorizing multiple items.

× I always remember the things and situation that happened when I was even the one year old

✓ I always remember the things and situations that happened when I was even one year old

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match 'things' and because multiple events are implied. Also, 'the one year old' should be 'one year old' without 'the' for correct expression of age.

× it's never happened that I have forgot something important

✓ it's never happened that I have forgotten something important

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' the past participle 'forgotten' should be used to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× I am really a plant person and I always make plans and do journals even in my head

✓ I am really a planned person and I always make plans and keep journals even in my head

The word 'plant' is incorrect here; the intended adjective is 'planned' to describe someone who plans well. Also, 'do journals' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep journals' or 'write journals'.

× I always make plans and do journals even in my head and also in the diary and my phone and set the alarms for each single thing

✓ I always make plans and keep journals even in my head, and also in my diary and phone, and set alarms for every single thing

The preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'diary' and 'phone' but the sentence needs commas for clarity. Also, 'set the alarms' should be 'set alarms' and 'each single thing' is better expressed as 'every single thing'.

× the main thing that I remember and works on it on daily basis

✓ the main thing that I remember and work on daily basis

The verb 'works' should be 'work' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'on daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' (article error, but not corrected here as per instructions).

× I have to take admission in Canada university

✓ I have to take admission to a Canadian university

The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to taking admission. Also, 'Canada university' should be 'Canadian university' to use the correct adjective form.

× it's really important to, uh, give its exam and take a really good ban in order to get in the university

✓ it's really important to, uh, take its exam and get a really good band score in order to get into the university

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect here; it should refer to the exam of the university or test. Also, 'give exam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take exam'. 'Ban' is a typo or mispronunciation of 'band' (score). 'Get in the university' should be 'get into the university'.

× I do remember every day and work on it on each single day without any

✓ I do remember it every day and work on it each and every day without fail

The phrase 'on each single day without any' is incomplete and awkward. 'Each single day' is better expressed as 'each and every day'. Also, 'remember every day' should specify what is remembered ('it').

× I do remember important things or any things by, uh, making schedules

✓ I do remember important things or anything by, uh, making schedules

The phrase 'any things' is incorrect; the correct word is 'anything' when referring to any unspecified thing.

× Even I told people to umm, re memorize me that I am going to do this important task

✓ I even tell people to, umm, remind me that I am going to do this important task

The phrase 're memorize me' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'remind' when asking someone to help you remember something. Also, 'told' should be 'tell' to match present tense context.