Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但可以避免重复表达“forget”和“difficult to remember”，并且可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put my phone or keys. Moreover, I find it challenging to remember people's names and faces, which sometimes embarrasses me.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复“reminders and alarms”。

예시: No, I rarely forget anything important since I rely heavily on my phone to stay organized. For instance, I set various alerts to make sure I never miss appointments or deadlines.

제안: 回答内容具体且有例子，但句子稍显冗长，可以适当简化并使用连接词提升流畅度。

예시: I need to remember to maintain a healthy lifestyle because it keeps me energetic and focused. Therefore, I set alarms to remind myself to drink enough water and eat meals on time, which helps me stay in good condition.

제안: 回答重复前面内容且结尾不完整，建议丰富表达，避免重复，并确保句子完整。

예시: I usually rely on my smartphone to remember important tasks. For example, I set reminders and alarms so that I never miss appointments or deadlines, which helps me stay organized throughout the day.

× I often forget where I put my phones or keys

✓ I often forget where I put my phone or keys

“phones”在这里指的是手机，通常一个人只用一部手机，所以应使用单数形式“phone”。“keys”是复数，表示多把钥匙，使用复数正确。

× which helps me in good condition

✓ which helps me stay in good condition

短语“helps me in good condition”缺少动词，正确表达应为“helps me stay in good condition”，表示“帮助我保持良好状态”。

× This.

句子“This.”不完整，缺少谓语和上下文，建议删除或补充完整句子。