Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Instead of 'I am good to memorize thing', say 'Yes, I am good at memorising things.' Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often use techniques like repetition and association to help me remember important information.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain. For example, say 'Sometimes I forget small things, especially when I am under pressure.'

예시: Sometimes I forget important things, especially when I am working under pressure. For example, I once missed a movie time because I was too busy with work.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks because I am an electrical engineer. I also need to remember instructions for my employees.'

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks carefully because I am an electrical engineer. Also, I have to give clear instructions to my employees to ensure the work is done properly.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'I usually write down important things after finishing my work to help me remember them.'

예시: I usually write down important tasks and notes after finishing my work. This helps me remember what I need to do next and stay organized.

× Yeah, I am good to memorize thing.

✓ Yeah, I am good at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at'. Also, 'memorize' should be in the gerund form 'memorizing' after 'good at'. Additionally, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general statement.

× No, I didn't have any. Forgot some important cinema time you need.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten any. I forgot some important cinema times you need.

The sentence lacks proper auxiliary verbs and correct tense. 'Didn't have any' is incorrect for forgetting; it should be 'haven't forgotten any'. The second sentence is fragmented and unclear; it should be 'I forgot some important cinema times you need' to clarify the meaning.

× Sometime I forget little bit, for example when we are working in pressure situations, then I forget in this time.

✓ Sometimes I forget a little bit, for example, when we are working under pressure, I forget at those times.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Forget little bit' needs an article 'a' and 'little bit' is better as 'a little bit'. 'Working in pressure situations' should be 'working under pressure'. 'Then I forget in this time' is awkward; 'I forget at those times' is clearer.

× First of all, I remember in our daily life about our works.

✓ First of all, I remember our work in daily life.

The phrase 'remember in our daily life about our works' is incorrect. 'Remember' does not require 'in' or 'about' here. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun in this context.

× For example, I am working as electrical engineers.

✓ For example, I am working as an electrical engineer.

The subject 'I' is singular, so the profession should be singular 'engineer' and preceded by the article 'an'.

× We are remembers our all activities, our all employees and we give instruction to our employee to do this work.

✓ We remember all our activities, all our employees, and we give instructions to our employees to do this work.

'Are remembers' is incorrect; it should be 'remember'. 'Our all' should be 'all our'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the plural subject. 'Employee' should be plural 'employees' to match 'all employees'.

× Ideally writing important things when we finish our job, Ideally, uh, noted and writing our importance works.

✓ Ideally, I write important things when we finish our job. Ideally, I note and write our important work.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb forms. 'Writing' should be 'I write'. 'Noted' should be 'note'. 'Importance works' is incorrect; it should be 'important work' as 'work' is uncountable here.