Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有口语化的词汇“Zing”显得不正式，且表达重复。建议用更自然流畅的表达，避免多余词汇，并且结构更清晰。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, my mother often asks me to do tasks, but I tend to forget them almost immediately. This shows that my memory is quite poor.

제안: 语法错误较多，如时态和词形错误，表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I have. For example, two years ago, I needed to take the IELTS exam, but I forgot my identification card at home. As a result, I felt very anxious and was unable to attend the test.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的语法，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: As a student, I need to remember assignment deadlines. Sometimes, I confuse the dates and forget to submit my work on time, which causes problems.

제안: 表达较为简单，语法有误，如“hardly to miss”。建议使用更准确的表达，并丰富细节，使回答更完整。

예시: I usually remember important things by writing them down. This method helps me keep track of my tasks, so I rarely miss anything important.

× Uh two years ago I need take an IELTS exam but I forgot my IC at home.

✓ Uh two years ago I needed to take an IELTS exam but I forgot my IC at home.

这里的时间是过去时，所以情态动词need应该用过去式needed，且后面需要加to不定式形式。

× I feel I'm so stupid and anxiety and that time I cannot join the test.

✓ I felt so stupid and anxious and at that time I could not join the test.

描述过去的感受和情况，动词feel应使用过去式felt，形容词anxiety应改为形容词形式anxious，情态动词cannot应改为过去式could not。

× For me as a student, definitely the deadline for assignment.

✓ For me as a student, definitely the deadline for assignments.

assignment是可数名词，表示多个作业时应使用复数形式assignments。

× Sometimes I always, uh, mix the deadline and I always forgot before the date to submit my assignment.

✓ Sometimes I always, uh, mix up the deadlines and I always forget before the date to submit my assignments.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时forget而非过去时forgot，deadline应使用复数deadlines，且动词mix后应加介词up构成短语动词mix up。

× I usually remember things by, uh, writing it down.

✓ I usually remember things by, uh, writing them down.

things是复数，代词it应改为them以保持一致。

× It's a good way to remind me what I need do and because of this I hardly to miss important things.

✓ It's a good way to remind me what I need to do and because of this I hardly miss important things.

动词need后应加to不定式to do，hardly后不应加to，直接用动词原形miss。