Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est un peu longue et manque de clarté. Essayez d'éviter les hésitations comme "Umm" et de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire suivie de détails spécifiques. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I easily remember important dates like my friends' and family's birthdays, as well as key topics from my classes, which helps me a lot in daily life.

제안: Votre réponse manque de cohérence et contient des phrases confuses. Évitez les hésitations et assurez-vous que vos phrases sont claires et logiques. Concentrez-vous sur un seul exemple précis et expliquez pourquoi c'était important.

예시: Yes, I once forgot my sister's birthday last year, which was very important to me. I felt bad and apologized because it showed how much I care about her.

제안: Votre réponse est répétitive et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus courtes et claires, et utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées. Faites attention à la grammaire, notamment à l'utilisation correcte des verbes et des pronoms.

예시: In my daily life, I use my calendar to set reminders for important tasks and events. This helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

제안: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour mieux structurer votre discours. Essayez aussi d'ajouter un exemple spécifique pour illustrer votre méthode.

예시: I rely on my good memory to remember important things, but I also use Google Calendar to set reminders with dates and times. For instance, I set a reminder for my friend's wedding to make sure I don't forget it.

× Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things.

No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Umm first of all, I can say it's easy for me to memorize birthday dates, all special heavens, special dates of my friends or family and any topic, basic topic of class or any courses I can keep it in mind for a long period of time.

✓ Umm, first of all, I can say it's easy for me to memorize birthday dates, all special events, special dates of my friends or family, and any topic, basic topics of class or any courses I can keep in mind for a long period of time.

The phrase 'special heavens' is incorrect; it should be 'special events'. Also, 'basic topic' should be plural 'basic topics' to match the plural 'any courses'. The phrase 'keep it in mind' is better as 'keep in mind' without 'it' when referring generally.

× Yes, umm, I've forgotten my sister's birthday and it's really important for me, that's why I talk about it.

✓ Yes, umm, I forgot my sister's birthday and it's really important to me, that's why I talk about it.

The present perfect 'I've forgotten' is less appropriate here than simple past 'I forgot' because the event happened at a specific time in the past. Also, 'important for me' should be 'important to me' for correct preposition usage.

× It was last year and it was not even a link, but I forgot to eat and I had to apologize a lot because of that.

✓ It was last year and it was not even a big deal, but I forgot to eat and I had to apologize a lot because of that.

The phrase 'not even a link' is incorrect; likely intended 'not even a big deal'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correcting it improves clarity.

× I can have some cups.

✓ I can have some cups.

This sentence is unclear and seems unrelated; no grammatical error identified from the list, so no correction applied.

× I just have to set the event in my calendar so I can remind me the daily things that I have to do or the event that are coming.

✓ I just have to set the event in my calendar so it can remind me of the daily things that I have to do or the events that are coming.

The pronoun 'I' cannot be used with 'remind me'; the calendar or device is the subject that reminds, so 'it can remind me' is correct. Also, 'remind me the daily things' should be 'remind me of the daily things'. 'Event that are coming' should be plural 'events that are coming'.

× So I think it's a very good idea to circle things on the calendar or to set a reminder so you can be remind that everything affords you.

✓ So I think it's a very good idea to circle things on the calendar or to set a reminder so you can be reminded of everything that concerns you.

'Be remind' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'be reminded'. Also, 'everything affords you' is incorrect; likely intended 'everything that concerns you' or 'everything you need to remember'.

× Like I mentioned before, I have a good memory so I just have to keep things in mind and secondly I just put the date of the important event on Google Calendar so it can remind me all the date of the event and the time as well.

✓ Like I mentioned before, I have a good memory so I just have to keep things in mind and secondly I just put the date of the important event on Google Calendar so it can remind me of the date of the event and the time as well.

The phrase 'remind me all the date' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of the date'. The preposition 'of' is necessary after 'remind'.

× So it's one of the tools that I usually use.

✓ So it's one of the tools that I usually use.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.