Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，且表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because it takes me a long time to remember new information, which can be quite tiring.

제안: 回答中句子断断续续，缺乏连贯性。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时提供更具体的细节。

예시: Yes, once in high school, I studied a topic thoroughly, but during the exam, I completely forgot the key points I had learned, which was very frustrating.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不完整且不连贯。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用连接词组织句子。

예시: I need to remember important dates because they help me plan my activities and avoid procrastinating on tasks.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用简洁的句子，避免重复，并说明具体方法。

예시: I usually write important dates and tasks in my diary to help me remember them easily.

× Well, I'm not good in memorizing things because.

✓ Well, I'm not good at memorizing things because.

介词短语中，表示擅长某事应使用介词'at'，而不是'in'。因此应改为"good at"。

× Well, I'm not good in memorizing things because.

✓ Well, I'm not good at memorizing things because.

动词后接动名词时，介词应正确使用，"good at"后应接动名词形式"memorizing"。

× Well, I'm not good in memorizing things because.

✓ Well, I'm not good at memorizing things because it takes a lot of time for me to take something or to retain something in my memory.

句子不完整，"because"后应有完整的原因说明，需补充完整句子。

× I find it very strenuous because it takes a lot of time for me to take something or to.

✓ I find it very strenuous because it takes a lot of time for me to take something or to retain something in my memory.

句子不完整，缺少动词"retain"，且"to"后应接动词原形。

× There was a time in high school.

✓ There was a time in high school.

句子时态正确，无需修改。

× I read something and it was already in my mind.

✓ I had read something and it was already in my mind.

描述过去某一时间之前发生的动作，应用过去完成时，表示先于过去某时发生的动作。

× But when I was sitting for my paper.

✓ But when I was sitting for my paper,

句子不完整，应为从句，后面需接主句内容。

× I forgot the content that I was supposed to write on my question paper.

✓ I forgot the content that I was supposed to write on my question paper.

句子时态正确，无需修改。

× I like Hall is to remember the date.

✓ I like how it is to remember the date.

原句中"Hall"应为"how"，且句子结构不正确，需调整为正确的表达。

× Of that particular day, since is very important for purposes of planning and also enables me not to.

✓ Of that particular day, since it is very important for purposes of planning and also enables me not to procrastinate events since it is part of life.

缺少主语"it"，且句子不完整，需补充完整。

× Post procrastinate events since it is part of life.

✓ Procrastinate events since it is part of life.

"Post procrastinate"用法错误，应为"procrastinate"，且句子应完整。

× Hi, I have other rebook that.

✓ Hi, I have other methods to remember the important things in my life.

句子结构混乱，"rebook"应为"methods"或其他合适词，需重构句子。

× Not the important things in my life.

✓ I note the important things in my life.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× For example, the important dates.

✓ For example, the important dates.

句子片段，需与前后句合并或补充谓语。

× I always note them in my diary book.

✓ I always note them in my diary.

"diary book"重复，通常只用"diary"即可。

× And also I always note everything important in my diary book.

✓ And also I always note everything important in my diary.

同上，"diary book"应简化为"diary"。