Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. For example, say "I'm not good at memorising things" instead of "memory things". Also, avoid redundancy by saying "I use my smartphone to record schedules or deadlines to help me remember and submit on time."

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I usually use my smartphone to record schedules or deadlines, which helps me remember important tasks and submit them on time.

제안: Focus on correct grammar and natural expressions. Instead of "I feel very apologize to them," say "I felt very sorry". Also, avoid repetition and be concise. For example, "I once forgot my best friend's birthday, and I felt very sorry. I promised to remember it next time."

예시: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, and I felt very sorry about it. I promised myself to remember and wish her on time next year.

제안: Clarify your ideas and use correct sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like "note down upon a little include so I had". Instead, say "I make sure to note down important details so I can complete my work on time." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important things such as due dates for my assessments and the specific structure required for my writing. Therefore, I always note down these details to ensure I complete my work on time.

제안: Use more natural expressions and correct app names if possible. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words. For example, "I use my smartphone to remember important things. I download apps like Reminder and Calendar, which notify me when an event is due."

예시: I use my smartphone to help me remember important things. For instance, I download apps like Reminder and Calendar, so when the time or day arrives, I get a notification to remind me.

× No, I'm not good at memory things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things.

The phrase 'memory things' is incorrect because 'memory' is a noun and does not describe 'things' properly here. The correct form is 'memorising things' where 'memorising' is a verb acting as a gerund to describe the action related to things. This correction aligns with the question about memorising.

× I often use smartphone to record some schedule or assessment deadline to help me remind the things and submit on time.

✓ I often use my smartphone to record schedules or assessment deadlines to help me remember things and submit on time.

The sentence lacks the possessive pronoun 'my' before 'smartphone'. Also, 'some schedule' is incorrect; 'schedules' (plural) fits better. 'Help me remind the things' is incorrect; it should be 'help me remember things' because 'remind' requires an object and a person to remind, while 'remember' is the correct verb here.

× Yes, I've forgotten my best friend's birthday once.

✓ Yes, I forgot my best friend's birthday once.

The present perfect tense 'I've forgotten' is less appropriate with the adverb 'once' which refers to a specific past time. The simple past 'I forgot' is more suitable to indicate a completed action at a definite time in the past.

× I feel very apologize to them, to her, and promise I'll do make a wish on time next.

✓ I feel very sorry to them, to her, and promise I'll make a wish on time next time.

'Apologize' is a verb and cannot be used after 'feel' in this way. The correct adjective is 'sorry'. Also, 'I'll do make a wish' is incorrect; it should be 'I'll make a wish'. Adding 'next time' clarifies the intended meaning.

× In my daily life, I need to remember important things like the due dates for my assessment task and the specific structure I have to follow when writing them.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember important things like the due dates for my assessment tasks and the specific structure I have to follow when writing them.

'Assessment task' should be plural 'assessment tasks' to match the plural 'due dates'. This is a singular and plural issue but also relates to quantifiers and agreement.

× For example, I make sure to note down upon a little include so I had I can complete my work on time.

✓ For example, I make sure to note down a few important points so I can complete my work on time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Note down upon a little include' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'a few important points' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× I would use my smartphone to help me remember the important things.

✓ I use my smartphone to help me remember important things.

The modal 'would' suggests a hypothetical or habitual action in the past, but the context implies a present habitual action. Using simple present 'I use' is more appropriate here.

× I would download the Reminder and Canada apps for helping me at some event on the calendar when this time or day arrives so the notification will pop up.

✓ I download the Reminder and Calendar apps to help me with events on the calendar; when the time or day arrives, the notification pops up.

'For helping me at some event' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to help me with events'. Also, 'Canada apps' is likely a typo for 'Calendar apps'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.