Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to give a full sentence that directly answers the question and add a brief explanation to make it more natural and effective.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details unless I write them down.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and try to be more concise.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as my sister's birthday on 27th February. Since then, I usually write important dates down to help me remember.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct sentence structure and be more specific about what you need to remember. Avoid filler phrases like 'So yeah, that's it I guess.'

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important events such as festivals and the birthdays of my close family members.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and avoiding informal fillers like 'Yeah.' Also, try to make your sentences more fluent and natural.

예시: Since I sometimes forget important dates, I usually write them down and set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

× No, I'm not good. The.

✓ No, I'm not good at it.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'The.' which is incorrect sentence structure. The corrected sentence completes the thought by adding 'at it' to specify what the student is not good at, making it a complete and clear sentence.

× Yes I do have forgotten something in my life and like my sister's birthday it was on 27th of Feb and I didn't remember it so after that time I usually write it down to remember.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something in my life, like my sister's birthday which was on 27th of February, and I didn't remember it. So after that, I usually write it down to remember.

The phrase 'I do have forgotten' is incorrect because 'have' should be followed by the past participle without 'do'. Also, the sentence is long and needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity. 'Like my sister's birthday it was on 27th of Feb' is corrected to 'like my sister's birthday which was on 27th of February' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I need to remember some of the important events like festivals, families, birthday who are in my priority list.

✓ I need to remember some important events like festivals, family birthdays that are on my priority list.

The word 'families' is incorrect here; it should be 'family birthdays' to refer to birthdays of family members. Also, 'birthday who are' is incorrect because 'birthday' is singular and cannot be referred to with 'who'. The correction uses 'that are' to refer to 'birthdays' properly.

× So yeah, that's it I guess.

✓ So yeah, that's it, I guess.

The original sentence lacks a comma before 'I guess' which is necessary to separate the clauses properly for better readability and correct sentence structure.

× As I don't remember some of my important dates so I usually write it down to remember it and I also make reminders in my phone.

✓ As I don't remember some of my important dates, I usually write them down to remember, and I also make reminders on my phone.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'dates' which is plural; it should be 'them'. Also, 'in my phone' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'on my phone'. The sentence is also improved by adding a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.