Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit redundant. Try to give a direct response first, then add a clear reason or example. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'there is something special about that' and focus on clarity.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by repeating information. For example, I remember vocabulary words by using flashcards.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing due to contradictory words like 'No' and 'sometimes'. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain your point clearly.

예시: I rarely forget important things because I am very responsible. However, I sometimes forget small items like my pen or phone charger when I am busy.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with details using linking words for coherence.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember what I eat because I recently started counting my calories. This helps me maintain a healthy diet by tracking the types and amounts of food.

제안: Your answer is too short and unclear. Provide a direct answer and explain your method or strategy for remembering important things with examples.

예시: I remember important things by making lists and setting reminders on my phone. This way, I don't forget tasks or appointments.

× Yes, but I don't think there is something special about that because people like my age and my peers usually have a good memory.

✓ Yes, but I don't think there is anything special about that because people my age and my peers usually have a good memory.

The phrase 'there is something special' is incorrect here because 'something' is used in affirmative sentences, but in negative sentences or after 'don't think', 'anything' is appropriate. Also, 'people like my age' is incorrect; it should be 'people my age' without 'like'. This is a 'There be issue' because of incorrect use of 'there is' with 'something' in a negative context.

× So because I'm only 15.

✓ That's because I'm only 15.

The sentence 'So because I'm only 15.' is incomplete and lacks a main clause, making it a sentence fragment. It should be connected properly to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× No, sometimes I usually forget simple things, for example, where did I put my pen or my phone charger?

✓ No, sometimes I forget simple things, for example, where I put my pen or my phone charger.

The phrase 'sometimes I usually forget' is contradictory and awkward; 'sometimes' and 'usually' should not be used together. Also, in indirect questions like 'where I put my pen', the word order should be subject + verb, not question form. This is a sentence structure error.

× That's because I am responsible all myself, so if there is something important, I won't forget it.

✓ That's because I am responsible for myself, so if there is something important, I won't forget it.

The phrase 'responsible all myself' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'responsible for myself'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions, but mainly pronouns here.

× A few months ago I started counting my calories so I have to remember it.

✓ A few months ago I started counting my calories so I have to remember them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'calories' is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'have to remember' is present tense which is acceptable here because the habit continues. The main issue is pronoun agreement, which relates to singular/plural usage.

× I mean what food did I eat and how much?

✓ I mean what food I ate and how much.

In indirect questions, the verb should be in past tense 'I ate' and the word order should be subject + verb, not question form. This is a past tense issue and sentence structure error.

× Nothing special about that question because it's just pops out of my mind.

✓ Nothing special about that question because it just pops out of my mind.

The phrase 'it's just pops' is incorrect because 'it' and 'pops' both have third person singular forms; only one verb form is needed. The correct form is 'it just pops'. This is a present tense issue related to subject-verb agreement.