Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, you could say: "I am generally good at memorising things, especially important information, but I sometimes struggle with remembering numbers or dates."

예시: I am generally good at memorising things, especially important information, but I sometimes struggle with remembering numbers or dates.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific details. For example: "Yes, last weekend I forgot about my friend's wedding even though they gave me an invitation card. Instead, I went to the gym and missed the event."

예시: Yes, last weekend I forgot about my friend's wedding even though they gave me an invitation card. Instead, I went to the gym and missed the event.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific details. For example: "In my daily life, I need to remember my morning routine, such as waking up and drinking a cup of water. Additionally, I have to remember to take my father to the park so he can socialize with others."

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my morning routine, such as waking up and drinking a cup of water. Additionally, I have to remember to take my father to the park so he can socialize with others.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use a clear topic sentence and linking words to improve coherence. For example: "I remember important tasks in different ways. For instance, I write notes and set reminders to help me complete my daily tasks."

예시: I remember important tasks in different ways. For instance, I write notes and set reminders to help me complete my daily tasks.

× I don't remember like some numbers or dates.

✓ I don't remember some numbers or dates.

The phrase 'like some numbers or dates' is incorrectly placed and unnecessary here. Removing 'like' clarifies the sentence and improves grammatical correctness.

× But if I the things I remember in my mind.

✓ But if I see the things, I remember them in my mind.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'if I'. Adding 'see' and 'them' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes last weekend my friend told me to came on the marriage and they gave me card too but I forgotten that thing and go to gym rest of the going to marriage.

✓ Yes, last weekend my friend told me to come to the marriage and they gave me a card too, but I forgot that and went to the gym instead of going to the marriage.

The verbs 'came', 'forgotten', and 'go' are incorrectly used. 'Came' should be 'come' after 'told me to'. 'Forgotten' should be 'forgot' as simple past tense. 'Go' should be 'went' to match past tense. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× In my daily life, I used to remember my morning routine like wake up and drink cup of water.

✓ In my daily life, I remember my morning routine like waking up and drinking a cup of water.

The verbs 'wake up' and 'drink' should be in gerund form 'waking up' and 'drinking' after 'like'. Also, 'a cup of water' requires the article 'a'.

× On the other hand, I have to remember my father's routine of taking to him in park to get engagement with others.

✓ On the other hand, I have to remember my father's routine of taking him to the park to interact with others.

The phrase 'taking to him in park' is incorrect. It should be 'taking him to the park'. Also, 'get engagement with others' is better expressed as 'interact with others' for clarity.

× I remember what tasks in different kind of ways, such as I used to write in notes, put reminders, that kind of things that I do to remember the important task which I have to do in the particular day.

✓ I remember tasks in different kinds of ways, such as writing notes, setting reminders, and other things I do to remember important tasks I have to do on a particular day.

The phrase 'what tasks in different kind of ways' is awkward; 'tasks in different kinds of ways' is correct. 'Write in notes' should be 'writing notes'. 'Put reminders' should be 'setting reminders'. Also, 'that kind of things' should be 'other things'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.